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The Way
stand
at the crossroads
of the present
look
at the past honestly
dispassionately
create
a future as though
rewriting the past
(C)2022 Raibeart Bruis
at the crossroads
of the present
look
at the past honestly
dispassionately
create
a future as though
rewriting the past
(C)2022 Raibeart Bruis
Published 11th Mar 2022
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12th Mar 2022 00:02am
Changing the past can mess with the future. Live and learn from your mistakes. Keep on writing.
25th Mar 2022 5:03pm
12th Mar 2022 2:34am
Dear KP,
I really enjoyed this poem. Speaks so directly and without fluff, I appreciated that. The second stanza is quite meaningful for me as a reminder to step back and see something with clarity. Terrific write. H🌷
I really enjoyed this poem. Speaks so directly and without fluff, I appreciated that. The second stanza is quite meaningful for me as a reminder to step back and see something with clarity. Terrific write. H🌷
25th Mar 2022 5:03pm
I am working on looking back, not as a way to hold on, but as a way to learn.
Thank you
🙏
Thank you
🙏
Anonymous
12th Mar 2022 5:39am
Stripping yourself of all the drama that might hinder.... and go to forward... To just do it .... was my takeaway.
Wonderfully impactful thoughts to ponder.
Thank you for sharing 🙏
🌹 - B
Wonderfully impactful thoughts to ponder.
Thank you for sharing 🙏
🌹 - B
25th Mar 2022 5:05pm
