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float
enters seduction, seducing filthiness
petting the petty little affliction, called wealth
hunting shadows, it's grim
a pornographic noose around your neck
it's all too transparent,
the ugliness of it all
I question reality it never liked me anyway
bedlam presses on the cranium awaiting escape
Jack the Ripper in a straight jacket picture that
hey you're cute, I hear from far off
somewhere, on the night air lingers a scream about to be freed
curl your toes and tiptoe with the giant death
monumental debt your soul, your check's rubber
trust in what's shiny, it just might be heavy enough
the abyss is waiting to see who floats
Published 11th Mar 2022
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11th Mar 2022 5:04am
Hamlet....
A play within the play....
Your illuminations of human hypocrisy and self-analysis are astounding.
Lights out. Truth just shut the door.
A play within the play....
Your illuminations of human hypocrisy and self-analysis are astounding.
Lights out. Truth just shut the door.
11th Mar 2022 3:54pm
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17th Mar 2022 5:05pm
thank you graciously dearest Wally most of these are just me channeling it is sometimes disturbing what comes forth I appreciate you read even these dark one 💕
18th Mar 2022 00:58am
“The abyss is waiting to see who floats”
That line is haunting and puts chills down my spine. This poem is excellent, I love it. Thank you for posting I love your writing style
-S
That line is haunting and puts chills down my spine. This poem is excellent, I love it. Thank you for posting I love your writing style
-S
18th Mar 2022 2:58am
thank you lovely Sierra for such a kind comment I deeply appreciate it these kind of poems sometimes disturb me but they allow me an outlet ❤️
