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Comfortable in Our Nakedness
As we stepped silently ever
closer to each other,
I heard your breath and sensed
all the living that is within you.
We stood completely
comfortable in our nakedness,
knowing that creation’s most
beautiful displays would
reveal in us.
As we caressed, your
warming cock pressed
against me and I caught
my breath in a dizzying
moment that dropped me
to my knees. I let my
face feel your heat and
imagine you inside of me.
closer to each other,
I heard your breath and sensed
all the living that is within you.
We stood completely
comfortable in our nakedness,
knowing that creation’s most
beautiful displays would
reveal in us.
As we caressed, your
warming cock pressed
against me and I caught
my breath in a dizzying
moment that dropped me
to my knees. I let my
face feel your heat and
imagine you inside of me.
Published 10th Mar 2022
Author's Note
I wrote this for my lover after one of our first nights together.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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10th Mar 2022 10:02pm
You have ways with your words to make the intimate moment surreal. I love your poetry in your context and your sweet lovely daughter. Keep up the spirit. What is new with her?
Love,
KS
Love,
KS
13th Mar 2022 11:39am
Thank you for your sweet comment. I'll have to encourage my daughter to share more words. It is good therapy for her...and me.
13th Mar 2022 2:11pm
Thanks. Expression is freedom of our passion to flare up in many form such as sing, dance, art, write and even to be in intimate display of love, sensuality, sex and naked body. I would love to hear from her. You enjoy your rendezvous moments
Love and hugs,
KS
Love and hugs,
KS
10th Mar 2022 10:02pm
13th Mar 2022 11:39am
A tingling read of an intimate moment. The 'getting naked' bit is my favourite part of literary sex scenes, the poignant moment of unveiling. This verse is savourable:
We stood completely
comfortable in our nakedness,
knowing that creation’s most
beautiful displays would
reveal in us. [I like such harking back to Adam and Eve]
I also like this phrase, for describing the moment of succumbing:
I caught
my breath in a dizzying
moment that dropped me
to my knees.
I am sure your lover feels very honoured.
We stood completely
comfortable in our nakedness,
knowing that creation’s most
beautiful displays would
reveal in us. [I like such harking back to Adam and Eve]
I also like this phrase, for describing the moment of succumbing:
I caught
my breath in a dizzying
moment that dropped me
to my knees.
I am sure your lover feels very honoured.
13th Mar 2022 11:40am
30th Aug 2022 11:21pm
There's nothing wrong with feeling the heat that a man is packing.
It's meant to be there to keep a woman warm.
If only more ladies would appreciate a man's God given gift to womankind.
It's meant to be there to keep a woman warm.
If only more ladies would appreciate a man's God given gift to womankind.
