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The love we make need not last
I bite my lips and shift my hips.
You touch my hair with your fingertips.
My inner thoughts are on display
Your kind attention will soon repay.
Futures made or futures lost?
I give my hair a playful toss.
I touch your arm and then I sigh.
You placed your hand upon my thigh.
The kind of man you seem to be
is the kind of man who’s right for me.
The love we make need not last for life.
I have no desires to become a wife.
You touch my hair with your fingertips.
My inner thoughts are on display
Your kind attention will soon repay.
Futures made or futures lost?
I give my hair a playful toss.
I touch your arm and then I sigh.
You placed your hand upon my thigh.
The kind of man you seem to be
is the kind of man who’s right for me.
The love we make need not last for life.
I have no desires to become a wife.
Published 9th Mar 2022
Author's Note
Love happens fast sometimes. I wrote this after meeting a new man recently. Our relationship, though passionate, will remain casual and I think we’re both happy with that.
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Anonymous
9th Mar 2022 1:25pm
Hi Nizana,how are you my dear?
I hope well.
I love this. It reasonates.
X
I hope well.
I love this. It reasonates.
X
13th Mar 2022 11:41am
Thank you so much for your sweet comment. I'm well and in love, lasting or not.
Anonymous
13th Mar 2022 8:12pm
That's Great Nizana. X
9th Mar 2022 1:38pm
9th Mar 2022 7:53pm
It is better to have a lover rather than a traditional couple without an iota of love and passion. Well worded.
KS
KS
13th Mar 2022 11:42am
Couldn't agree with you more. As long as our love lasts, we will enjoy it. If it ends, we'll treasure the memories.
10th Mar 2022 00:48am
I enjoyed this piece. The picture you painted in the first two stanzas was a titillating portrait of fun and romance; and I loved the honest ending.
You are a talented writer.
So many of the photos which accompany your poems are deeply personal, and I appreciate the info you often provide about them. How did you select the photo for this poem?
You are a talented writer.
So many of the photos which accompany your poems are deeply personal, and I appreciate the info you often provide about them. How did you select the photo for this poem?
13th Mar 2022 11:45am
This was a cropped image of my ex-husband and I from a photo shoot before our divorce. I thought it was a strange choice, but fit the "not lasting" part of the poem and I liked the tenderness of the kiss.
10th Mar 2022 7:12am
A picture of fun and romance, to quote RPM1on1. Like the merry rhyme scheme, I could visualise the lovemaking.
11th Mar 2022 5:28pm
13th Mar 2022 11:46am
30th Aug 2022 11:16pm
The best love is always the kind that's open to all sorts of possibilities.
LIMITLESS!!!
LIMITLESS!!!
