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what went wrong

friend or foe
friend or foe    
   
head up or to toe    
winter stings,    
the wheat,  
waving her once known strength    
barren now as far as one may see    
why    
oh why did it have to be    
    
like this    
torn with the false    
red do remiss    
gods of their sins    
withered away,  
white flag, it waves
at the helm    
open arms,  
bruised, blue, bare    
stung from the stem    
no longer brave  
no where to keep warm    
   
death approaches    
were dying    
to know what went wrong    
only with them    
   
scars sewn at the hem    
rolled up    
marching in mud    
blaming others for what    
we truly have done    
   
oh where is the sun    
oh where is the sun  
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