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And I said, Hey What's Going On !?
my thoughts are jumbled
in a contortionists nightmare
there seems to be no refuge
from the insipid noise
thoughts scream
throbbing in the agony
of pain and soulless encounters
with the evil
that ruptures holes
in my soul
I'm tired of being human
in a contortionists nightmare
there seems to be no refuge
from the insipid noise
thoughts scream
throbbing in the agony
of pain and soulless encounters
with the evil
that ruptures holes
in my soul
I'm tired of being human
Published 5th Mar 2022
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5th Mar 2022 5:15pm
Dear J,
Right beside you on this one. My god it’s exhausting being human. And what’s more I’m not even a good one but compared to some in authority I’m a saint. 😉
Gut wrenching, soul baring, expression of truth. Wonderful piece. H🌷
Right beside you on this one. My god it’s exhausting being human. And what’s more I’m not even a good one but compared to some in authority I’m a saint. 😉
Gut wrenching, soul baring, expression of truth. Wonderful piece. H🌷
6th Mar 2022 1:00am
Dear H🌹 ,
Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments .. the struggle is very real... sigh .. I keep looking for the light at the end of the tunnel .. it seems so far away at times.. I hope we can get there .. I hope those in high places with lowly goals realize that we all matter. Greed is such an insidious monster.
Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments .. the struggle is very real... sigh .. I keep looking for the light at the end of the tunnel .. it seems so far away at times.. I hope we can get there .. I hope those in high places with lowly goals realize that we all matter. Greed is such an insidious monster.
14th Mar 2022 12:38pm
Aaahh, Jem, the song is an all time favorite for me and your piece made it just as great, definitely felt.
15th Mar 2022 9:33pm
Thank you so much Particles for your thoughtful comments. . Very much appreciated
Humbled and honored by the taking
Peace 🦋
JeJe
Humbled and honored by the taking
Peace 🦋
JeJe
