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2/28/22 senryu

This is what it's like
To have her- a place, a time
Like the Northern Lights

Written by SatInUGal

(Kumar)

Published 28th Feb 2022

#IMissYou #LongDistanceRelationship #lover #senryu

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Re. 2/28/22 senryu

28th Feb 2022 9:46pm

you need another syllable in verse three but I like where you go with this

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28th Feb 2022 9:53pm

Thanks, and done!

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28th Feb 2022 11:04pm

yay!!!

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