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breathe
..sucking you in..
..to the back of my skull..
..where I exist..
..as if we knew what that meant..
..to soak up the pheromones..
..and spend all my endorphins..
..then left empty..
..and begging for another instant of you..
..to the back of my skull..
..where I exist..
..as if we knew what that meant..
..to soak up the pheromones..
..and spend all my endorphins..
..then left empty..
..and begging for another instant of you..
Published 29th Jan 2010
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30th Jan 2010 00:18am
Your jagged edges make very interesting seams. Nice to meet you this way.
H
H
30th Jan 2010 2:31am
thank you very much.. a lot of my other poems are much more extreme and violent and harsh.. so be forewarned.. nice to meet you too btw
30th Jan 2010 00:46am
a good poem from the heart, I like how it's written and the meaning is true of most love.
To give your all and get nothing.
To give your all and get nothing.
30th Jan 2010 2:35am
yes this was from the heart.. though I don't know if I wrote it to anyone in particular I'll have to look at the file I have.. I dont usually name the people theyre for in public.. at least not anymore.. but thanks glad you like it.. most of my other poems are from a place of anger.. i do have a heart though.. that has been crushed many a time from getting nothing in the end but spent endorphins and an aching chest..
30th Jan 2010 5:15am
30th Jan 2010 5:59am
Anonymous
30th Jan 2010 9:54am
Such..... closeness is captured here. A serene moment..
I like this one
S
I like this one
S
30th Jan 2010 10:38pm
thanks so much. closeness...yes. a lot different from my darker stuff. way at the other end of the spectrum. glad you dig this one. cheers!!
