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WHY IS IT WRONG?
WONDERING
As I share with
others my desire
to put my lover first,
and myself last,
I hear hisses, groans,
and "How dumb."
I know, I hear others
say how fast they
launched out of the
starting gate and finished
in a record-breaking
time.
NO,
not me I had rather
be sure my lover is
first and totally satisfied
before I accept mine.
My pleasure level is
raised 1000 percent
when I know my lover
has been satisfied.
Time has no limits;
actions have no limits
or barriers...
IT'S
my lover first.
No, it's not a mechanical
action produced like
a business plan to execute.
Again, why is it wrong
for me not to be the
proverbial "Jack Rabbit."
Hey, if it's right for you
and your lover, great,
keep on going for it.
But if not for YOU,
meet me at the Kissing
Place and we'll do
OUR thing. Yes, I'll wait.
OKAY?
As I share with
others my desire
to put my lover first,
and myself last,
I hear hisses, groans,
and "How dumb."
I know, I hear others
say how fast they
launched out of the
starting gate and finished
in a record-breaking
time.
NO,
not me I had rather
be sure my lover is
first and totally satisfied
before I accept mine.
My pleasure level is
raised 1000 percent
when I know my lover
has been satisfied.
Time has no limits;
actions have no limits
or barriers...
IT'S
my lover first.
No, it's not a mechanical
action produced like
a business plan to execute.
Again, why is it wrong
for me not to be the
proverbial "Jack Rabbit."
Hey, if it's right for you
and your lover, great,
keep on going for it.
But if not for YOU,
meet me at the Kissing
Place and we'll do
OUR thing. Yes, I'll wait.
OKAY?
Published 21st Feb 2022
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21st Feb 2022 12:25pm
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21st Feb 2022 12:35pm
Thank you, sir; hope your day is better than you hoped it would be. Hugs and peace, Oral
21st Feb 2022 12:35pm
Thank you, sir; hope your day is better than you hoped it would be. Hugs and peace, Oral
21st Feb 2022 5:53pm
Yep. It's appropriate, but not common. The modern relationship is selfish and less devoted. Which is why most relationships don't last.
You are a great human being and an old soul.
You are a great human being and an old soul.
21st Feb 2022 6:23pm
22nd Feb 2022 6:13am
Hey O
Fabalous poem, great and true subject matter. You know I've learnt a few things over life and some reading and stuff. I also share your feelings in this matter.
Well done my friend
Love n peace
💜💜💜🙏🙏
Fabalous poem, great and true subject matter. You know I've learnt a few things over life and some reading and stuff. I also share your feelings in this matter.
Well done my friend
Love n peace
💜💜💜🙏🙏
