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SWEET #AD# #UCK
SWEET #AD# #UCK
I keep sticking money into you
just to get high
watching my honey
sucking me dry
Just suck it. Take it. Take it all.
You know what I want
TEASE ME
PLEASE ME
EASE THIS
DISEASE IN ME
SING---GIVE IT TO ME
BRING IT----LIve to pour out on me
You know I'm faithful
I always come to you
gripping this stiff rod
I hand you my money
A hard swift yank
in exchange for a playful prank
I JUST WANT EVERYTHING!
SING!!!!!!
JACK....JACK....JACK..........
POT...POT...POT........
#UCK! #UCK! #UCK!!!!!!!!
Pour your inner treasures out onto me
SWEET LADY LUCK
I keep sticking money into you
just to get high
watching my honey
sucking me dry
Just suck it. Take it. Take it all.
You know what I want
TEASE ME
PLEASE ME
EASE THIS
DISEASE IN ME
SING---GIVE IT TO ME
BRING IT----LIve to pour out on me
You know I'm faithful
I always come to you
gripping this stiff rod
I hand you my money
A hard swift yank
in exchange for a playful prank
I JUST WANT EVERYTHING!
SING!!!!!!
JACK....JACK....JACK..........
POT...POT...POT........
#UCK! #UCK! #UCK!!!!!!!!
Pour your inner treasures out onto me
SWEET LADY LUCK
Published 21st Feb 2022
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Anonymous
21st Feb 2022 6:21am
Sounds like the slots 🎰 are definitely calling?!? (I'm guessing?!) ... I live about 5 miles from one of the biggest casinos in the entire world. (no kidding) Thankfully, I keep that idea out of my head and only take out of town guests there when they visit. I've easily watched thousands slip away in hours and I've also been witness to thousands won in less than 20 minutes on the game floor. It's a mysterious place, indeed...
Killer piece, Archie!
🌹 - 💙
B
Killer piece, Archie!
🌹 - 💙
B
21st Feb 2022 6:42am
I wrote this about a gambler addicted to slots. I Intentionally made it look like something else. Because, Hey, I love playing with words. Where the fuck else am I supposed to publish the punchline?
21st Feb 2022 9:22am
21st Feb 2022 6:56am
Anonymous
21st Feb 2022 6:59am
I caught it... no worries.... still, great idea and terrific word usage!
21st Feb 2022 7:33am
this is very clever Archie I love the slots and I'm lucky with them
my son too like me but also like me we don't know when to take the money and run
just as addicting as the cash is the crowds and energy surrounding you when you're winning...
well in any case great write
my son too like me but also like me we don't know when to take the money and run
just as addicting as the cash is the crowds and energy surrounding you when you're winning...
well in any case great write
22nd Feb 2022 1:32am
23rd Feb 2022 12:05pm
my poem, SWEET SADE FUCK was intentionally crafted to have two seperate meanings .
both of which live within two separate worlds
both of which live within two separate worlds
1st Mar 2022 12:11pm
