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Silenced
Frantic
to be heard
her internal voice..
whispers.
Apprehensive,
lacking confidence
Her internal voice...
quivers.
Plagued by insecurities
Relentless self loathing
Her internal voice...
muffled.
Unsettled by change
Consumed by self doubt
Her internal voice..
hesitates.
Routinely ignored
Repeatedly dismissed
Her internal voice..
Silenced
to be heard
her internal voice..
whispers.
Apprehensive,
lacking confidence
Her internal voice...
quivers.
Plagued by insecurities
Relentless self loathing
Her internal voice...
muffled.
Unsettled by change
Consumed by self doubt
Her internal voice..
hesitates.
Routinely ignored
Repeatedly dismissed
Her internal voice..
Silenced
Published 20th Feb 2022
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20th Feb 2022 8:04pm
The struggle is real - the withdrawal to introvert a seemingly safe haven; but it really is not. Without other voices the anxiety and depression are all you hear.
I hope by your writing, poetry and posting, you are speaking and getting supportive feedback. We hear you and you are not lost. Your voice matters. Hug!
I hope by your writing, poetry and posting, you are speaking and getting supportive feedback. We hear you and you are not lost. Your voice matters. Hug!
20th Feb 2022 8:08pm
20th Feb 2022 8:45pm
20th Feb 2022 10:13pm
hello dearest Joy wow I think we're on similar wavelengths today
I just read yours I often wonder that we are as poets feelings similarly on any given day
this says in such a powerful way what was coming through to me creatively and inside...
great write...
I just read yours I often wonder that we are as poets feelings similarly on any given day
this says in such a powerful way what was coming through to me creatively and inside...
great write...
20th Feb 2022 10:15pm
21st Feb 2022 4:53am
Dear J,
I really appreciated the irony within the poem. Desperate to be heard, internal voice silenced. I think this write has touched many nerves for me in trying to find a comfortable place within myself whereby it’s okay to say something without fear of not being loved or heard. Amazing piece. H🌷
I really appreciated the irony within the poem. Desperate to be heard, internal voice silenced. I think this write has touched many nerves for me in trying to find a comfortable place within myself whereby it’s okay to say something without fear of not being loved or heard. Amazing piece. H🌷
21st Feb 2022 7:05am
21st Feb 2022 1:07pm
This poem is awesome and so relatable. There were many times where I've felt silenced. Thanks for sharing! :)
21st Feb 2022 2:05pm
21st Feb 2022 3:51pm
this happens a lot
in that movie, finding nemo,
That fish is tied to a poisonous coral
for protection. The head honcho fish grows larger,
while everybody else stays stunted.
If the big fish dies or leaves the coral plant,
then one of the other fish steps up and grows larger.
in that movie, finding nemo,
That fish is tied to a poisonous coral
for protection. The head honcho fish grows larger,
while everybody else stays stunted.
If the big fish dies or leaves the coral plant,
then one of the other fish steps up and grows larger.
7th Mar 2022 8:33am
Hello
I felt that this poem is perfect journey of the emotions that run through us in these periods of our lives, when the darkness rules us. I'm very grateful that you wrote this poem. You have done a marvelous job of it.
Thank You for the read
Blue Skies At You!
Al
I felt that this poem is perfect journey of the emotions that run through us in these periods of our lives, when the darkness rules us. I'm very grateful that you wrote this poem. You have done a marvelous job of it.
Thank You for the read
Blue Skies At You!
Al
9th Mar 2022 1:25am
10th Apr 2022 8:15am
thank you for breaking free with your amazing words...honest and bare...stripped off all pretense and so wholeheartedly worded.
wishing you all the best for all that you seek to find..and keep!
wishing you all the best for all that you seek to find..and keep!
26th Feb 2023 2:31pm
26th Feb 2023 3:55pm
