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The Last Cut is the Creepiest
The crazy,
They aint got nobody
&
Go
More crazy -
Crinkled
In
Emaciated
Body -
The scene
You see
On
The pavements
Of society
Without
The
Context
Of
Preceding moments
&
What came
Next.
The first cut is the deepest -
But the last cut
Is
The creepiest.
Published 20th Feb 2022
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20th Feb 2022 9:53pm
hi there dearest Cipher I can attest to the truth of this
I wonder when madness crept in you know
when institutions became needed
I wonder...
would they have put Noah away?
for tirelessly building that arc...
when did we as beings get that little tic called insanity...
great write it stirred a lot of feelings for me
and that last line a killer...
I wonder when madness crept in you know
when institutions became needed
I wonder...
would they have put Noah away?
for tirelessly building that arc...
when did we as beings get that little tic called insanity...
great write it stirred a lot of feelings for me
and that last line a killer...
22nd Feb 2022 11:43am
Thank you Crimsin.
You have made
strength and beauty of it all, regardless.
Oh yes.
Based on the DSM,
we are all pathological...
It is only a matter of degree.
Like WTF.
(Yes... So many historical figures
from Noah to Socrates to Honest Abe Lincoln...
They would have all received a strait jacket
and a lobotomy for their troubles. :p )
In many ways or maybe even all ways,
the modern world is a process of
creating/selling the disease and selling the cure...
Which requires yet another cure.
Like creatures dwelling a realm of toxic waste.
But then...
Beautiful mutations can come about
in such milieus.
:)))
You have made
strength and beauty of it all, regardless.
Oh yes.
Based on the DSM,
we are all pathological...
It is only a matter of degree.
Like WTF.
(Yes... So many historical figures
from Noah to Socrates to Honest Abe Lincoln...
They would have all received a strait jacket
and a lobotomy for their troubles. :p )
In many ways or maybe even all ways,
the modern world is a process of
creating/selling the disease and selling the cure...
Which requires yet another cure.
Like creatures dwelling a realm of toxic waste.
But then...
Beautiful mutations can come about
in such milieus.
:)))
