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In the Club [Tanka]
Glass bottle empty
General feeling of love
Distorted music
Dance my heart out in the club
Wake up aching in the tub
General feeling of love
Distorted music
Dance my heart out in the club
Wake up aching in the tub
Published 17th Feb 2022
Author's Note
TANKA - a Japanese poetry form with the format 5-7-5-7-7 syllables.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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17th Feb 2022 5:41pm
17th Feb 2022 9:32pm
17th Feb 2022 5:44pm
Sounds like a damn good time, until the next morning! I can relate lol. Thanks for sharing!
17th Feb 2022 9:33pm
27th Feb 2022 2:47am
Know the feeling all too well. It’s nice to read someone who deals with similar issues as me.
