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My Shadow On Earth
what if i had
no family
no culture
no history?
what if i was no longer
husband
son
teacher
homeowner
taxpayer
citizen
artist
carpenter
healer
student
father
man?
what if my memories were erased?
if i could no longer remember
the stories beneath my scars
what if i could no longer
name the stars?
who would i be?
what if i was given a blank slate?
who would i be?
who is asking the question?
who am i?
am i
???
(C) 2022 Raibeart Bruis
no family
no culture
no history?
what if i was no longer
husband
son
teacher
homeowner
taxpayer
citizen
artist
carpenter
healer
student
father
man?
what if my memories were erased?
if i could no longer remember
the stories beneath my scars
what if i could no longer
name the stars?
who would i be?
what if i was given a blank slate?
who would i be?
who is asking the question?
who am i?
am i
???
(C) 2022 Raibeart Bruis
Published 16th Feb 2022
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16th Feb 2022 7:57pm
You will be still as is, as a man who stands, however, the road you set your feet upon will be the most rewarding path to add to your insights as you accumulate the gifts of life's offerings and rewards, and to discern the sorrows found in others. Such complexities to face but those are the traits which builds true character.
What a pondering question worth asking self, my poet
What a pondering question worth asking self, my poet
16th Feb 2022 11:45pm
Dear KP,
The possibilities are limitless however, in my experience with a blank canvas such as this, there are consequences that might end up more uncomfortable than what we already know. That aside, I’d be Gina Lollobrigida! 😊
Enjoyed the free thought and where this could lead if offered the chance to rewrite what is known. H🌷
The possibilities are limitless however, in my experience with a blank canvas such as this, there are consequences that might end up more uncomfortable than what we already know. That aside, I’d be Gina Lollobrigida! 😊
Enjoyed the free thought and where this could lead if offered the chance to rewrite what is known. H🌷
17th Feb 2022 00:09am
