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Paradise Sunrise
It’ll be here any minute
When I see the light
Going to run towards a
Paradise Sunrise
Got a bag packed
Full of letter seeds
Ready to bloom on the
Fields of my skin
Got my aviator
Ray-Ban glasses on
Sun beam guitar strings
Awakening with a yawn
Nourishing my spring
Of rose petal skin
Sprouting a garden
Creating words to sing
Arranged to set sail
Upon a sun stream trip
Infiltrating the dead of night
So it can feel the life of a
Paradise Sunrise
When I see the light
Going to run towards a
Paradise Sunrise
Got a bag packed
Full of letter seeds
Ready to bloom on the
Fields of my skin
Got my aviator
Ray-Ban glasses on
Sun beam guitar strings
Awakening with a yawn
Nourishing my spring
Of rose petal skin
Sprouting a garden
Creating words to sing
Arranged to set sail
Upon a sun stream trip
Infiltrating the dead of night
So it can feel the life of a
Paradise Sunrise
Published 13th Feb 2022
Author's Note
The weather here has been wonderful 65 degrees this past week. Just perfect!!!!
I know it is suppose to be cold but I am partial to warm weather.
Always love the cool mornings then in the afternoon it is just awesome.
Open the windows and air out the house kinda weather:)
Listening to -
Eddie Money - two tickets to paradise
Love this song!!!!
I know it is suppose to be cold but I am partial to warm weather.
Always love the cool mornings then in the afternoon it is just awesome.
Open the windows and air out the house kinda weather:)
Listening to -
Eddie Money - two tickets to paradise
Love this song!!!!
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13th Feb 2022 10:21pm
13th Feb 2022 10:23pm
Your poem reminds me of a film I saw once, forgotten now the name.
But I'm ready too for that sunrise paradise trip :)
Lovely easy feel good read Adel
Really like it
Love n peace
💜💜💜💜🙏🙏
Ps,,, listened to that song,,,, yea, its good I liked it, good vintage too:) easy listening for sure,
But I'm ready too for that sunrise paradise trip :)
Lovely easy feel good read Adel
Really like it
Love n peace
💜💜💜💜🙏🙏
Ps,,, listened to that song,,,, yea, its good I liked it, good vintage too:) easy listening for sure,
13th Feb 2022 10:25pm
Awhh.
Thanks Whyme:)
Love to make people feel good.
Life is hard so happy to shine on ya amigo:)
have a great day!!!
Thanks Whyme:)
Love to make people feel good.
Life is hard so happy to shine on ya amigo:)
have a great day!!!
13th Feb 2022 10:31pm
13th Feb 2022 10:42pm
I know for an absolute fact that inspiration can come from the strangest things ever 😁
13th Feb 2022 10:27pm
13th Feb 2022 10:30pm
hahahah. Woop Woop!!
Glad you enjoyed Mr. Amigo.
Hey now - Where is my hot sauce!!!
hehehehe
Thanks for the RL stopping by!!!
Glad you enjoyed Mr. Amigo.
Hey now - Where is my hot sauce!!!
hehehehe
Thanks for the RL stopping by!!!
13th Feb 2022 11:26pm
15th Feb 2022 1:42am
Hi Ron!!
Hey there. Don't forget the amazing hat and
the Hawaiian button up either!!! You are styling:)
Glad you enjoyed amigo:)
Hey there. Don't forget the amazing hat and
the Hawaiian button up either!!! You are styling:)
Glad you enjoyed amigo:)
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14th Feb 2022 4:10am
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15th Feb 2022 1:49am
Hey Relic!!
Happy Valentines Day Buddy:)
Yes - he sure did. I was driving to the bank and the song came on the radio while I was driving. The sun was out - Just freaking golden day.
And I thought about how the sunrise feels on your skin on a cool morning. Sometimes it gives me goosebumps it feels so good. hahah
Gotta admit I also got inspired by your poem "I saw her today"
you brought up spring. It was that kind of day listening to Mr. Money. Love that you were listening to the song while commenting.
Too cool!!!
Thanks for stopping by and commenting:)
Happy Valentines Day Buddy:)
Yes - he sure did. I was driving to the bank and the song came on the radio while I was driving. The sun was out - Just freaking golden day.
And I thought about how the sunrise feels on your skin on a cool morning. Sometimes it gives me goosebumps it feels so good. hahah
Gotta admit I also got inspired by your poem "I saw her today"
you brought up spring. It was that kind of day listening to Mr. Money. Love that you were listening to the song while commenting.
Too cool!!!
Thanks for stopping by and commenting:)
14th Feb 2022 9:17am
Engaged my senses and imagination
in such a beautiful way.
Aviators are also my preferred style of sunglasses.
:)))
in such a beautiful way.
Aviators are also my preferred style of sunglasses.
:)))
15th Feb 2022 2:01am
Hey Cipher:)
So glad I engaged your senses and imagination.
Best comment. I love to stand up stanzas with pictures
and let the imagination just gravitate where it wants to
go naturally with words.
The day was freaking awesome when I wrote this.
Of course you prefer Aviators - you're super cool like me. hehehe
Not sure if you are a chocolate guy but gotta grab some
Ferrero Rocher chocolates amigo - if you have not been gifted with yet. They are the bomb!!!
Yes - I'm being bossy.
Happy Valentines Day amigo
So glad I engaged your senses and imagination.
Best comment. I love to stand up stanzas with pictures
and let the imagination just gravitate where it wants to
go naturally with words.
The day was freaking awesome when I wrote this.
Of course you prefer Aviators - you're super cool like me. hehehe
Not sure if you are a chocolate guy but gotta grab some
Ferrero Rocher chocolates amigo - if you have not been gifted with yet. They are the bomb!!!
Yes - I'm being bossy.
Happy Valentines Day amigo
14th Feb 2022 7:59pm
15th Feb 2022 2:03am
Hey Tim!!
You and me both. ha!
Day was awesome and had to write about.
Eddie Money came on the radio and there went
my imagination. Just felt that spark.
So glad you stopped by for a comment amigo!!
Happy Valentines Day!!!!
You and me both. ha!
Day was awesome and had to write about.
Eddie Money came on the radio and there went
my imagination. Just felt that spark.
So glad you stopped by for a comment amigo!!
Happy Valentines Day!!!!
15th Feb 2022 3:49am
This does indeed read like a song. It's the cadence you built in it. Such a sweetly inspiring "song" to lift the dreary drab of winter.
Well, the ones who suffer a winter. Lol. Although it is a bit brutal here currently. Like 52 degrees. Pretty bad I tell ya!
Great poem you've warmed us with!
Well, the ones who suffer a winter. Lol. Although it is a bit brutal here currently. Like 52 degrees. Pretty bad I tell ya!
Great poem you've warmed us with!
16th Feb 2022 3:28am
Hey Styx:)
So glad you like my ESTIVAL inspired write. heheh
Love that song. The guitar in it is just perfecto.
Just feeling good so I decided to write something
about it. I don't mind the cold for a couple of days.
Just not months of it. Makes my skin all dry and itchy.
I know that sounds bratty but I'm okay with that:)
Hope you had a great Valenitne's Day amigo:)
So glad you like my ESTIVAL inspired write. heheh
Love that song. The guitar in it is just perfecto.
Just feeling good so I decided to write something
about it. I don't mind the cold for a couple of days.
Just not months of it. Makes my skin all dry and itchy.
I know that sounds bratty but I'm okay with that:)
Hope you had a great Valenitne's Day amigo:)
