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Parting
Published 31st Jan 2022
Author's Note
My entry in the January visual poetry competition. These reflections on regret came from personal experience.
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31st Jan 2022 12:49pm
31st Jan 2022 12:52pm
Thank you for your encouragement. It was good to reflect back and describe the regret I felt.
Anonymous
31st Jan 2022 1:29pm
Hi Nizana,this is heartfelt,lovely. X
31st Jan 2022 1:49pm
31st Jan 2022 1:47pm
31st Jan 2022 1:49pm
31st Jan 2022 3:55pm
Dear N,
You’ve beautifully expressed that exhale of having to let something go. The ache afterward resonated throughout the poem, which I think is a difficult effect to achieve and you did it masterfully. I wish you all the best in the comp. Very lovely write. H🌷
You’ve beautifully expressed that exhale of having to let something go. The ache afterward resonated throughout the poem, which I think is a difficult effect to achieve and you did it masterfully. I wish you all the best in the comp. Very lovely write. H🌷
1st Feb 2022 1:45am
5th Sep 2022 00:56am
This unfortunately sad but well expressed clearly written reflection about your past.
As with all heroes in this story of life we rise as we fall and rise again.
It is good to know you have risen.
As with all heroes in this story of life we rise as we fall and rise again.
It is good to know you have risen.
