Poetry Stained Teeth

Great write, great read
Love and light
Ron x

Hey Ron,

Just something I had to write down
before it disappeared.

Thank you for checking it out
and commenting amigo:)

This is marvelous. The title alone is a masterpiece. Reminds me of maybe...nicotine stained fingers. An image which speaks true, but might have different meanings depending on who is the observent, values of positivity, negativity, or neutrality that factor's dependent.

Hey Em!!

Thank you so much. You are spot on about the nicotine stained fingers. I was going to use that saying since we write with our fingers instead of teeth - but I changed my mind.  So glad you
stopped by for a comment amigo:)

So glad you changed your mind! I think it works perfecter as it is!!!

Great line
Great cadence and build up
PS digs

BIG LIKE

Hey PS!!!

So glad you dig amigo.
Just something I had to put down on paper. hahah

Thanks for visiting and the RL too!!!
Woop Woop:)

Great title… great poem then delivered… well penned…

Hey LilD

Thank you. I love when writing and you get that lightning bolt of a line.
I feel you know exactly what I'm talking about. hahah
It's such a rush right. LOL
Had to use.

Thanks for stopping by and the RL!!!!

I love the title. It's what pulled me in
 

Hey Nik!!!

Totally glad it pulled you in:)
Was just writing and when I think of monsters
they have sharp teeth. Had to use.

So happy you stopped by and took a look!

Brilliant

Best one word comment ever. hahahah

Thank you for stopping by and reading amigo:

Dear A,

I can see this.  I think most of us gnaw our way through poetry for one reason or another.  It’s a very cerebral and oral  activity as once we conceive it mentally we speak it orally.  And sometimes poetry is down right dirty. :-)
That was a great idea to get it down in writing before it got lost forever.  I’m pretty sure I would’ve been a poet laureate if I’d have written all the brilliant nuggets I’ve thought of in the past and didn’t. (NOT!)
Great write. H🌷

Hello H!!

We do gnaw, scribble and scratch out. LOL I do love your comment.
So insightful in your interpretation of my work and others here at DUP. I read the line and for some reason it sang and off to the races I went. I even asked Cipher for permission on my comment. Got a thumbs up and here it is. Teeth and all. hahahah

Have a great day Honoria:)
Thanks for the RL and comment

Aw shit...  Ya done went and did it.  Ha.

Some metaphysical concepts, on display here.

Like you know me, in some ways.

I really appreciate that something
in whatever it is that I do with the written word, has inspired you to produce art.

To me...  That is the highest form of existence.  (producing art...  and to inspire
someone do live in such a way...  well...  that means everything to me.)

You really make me think.

I was just talking to someone about some things...

I feel like I want to write about this.

Its like...

Well...  Thinking about being wired for fear in the womb.

and how this effects your life, going forward.

but also, how I have come to view this as an opportunity to get stronger...

And how being strong is divine man.

like...  hell yeah there were unspeakable aspects to "the fault in my stars".

But I made meaning and beauty of those things.

To overcome the fear makes you a monster.

and now...

(I dont know what kind of write this will be
but I always feel inclined to pursue such things, relentlessly.)

Tis a place where your curses become blessings.

(I am going to explore this in a write...)

Be well Adelphina.

Hey Cipher,

So glad you enjoyed this. I got a comment from Styxian on one of my other poems and he was spot on. He said "writers in the creative sense, are usually in tune a bit deeper and more thorough than non writers." In my opinion he is absolutely right - being able to decipher beneath the ink (like how I did that -  hehe).  

It does take conviction to rewire yourself. To be able to pull
yourself out of the loop. I am rooting for you. Your writing is great and it honestly exudes a lot of strength.

Sometimes when I write I feel like I am a medium. I am there but someone else is walking. One word after word after word. Like footsteps walking down the poem. When I'm finished I think - holy shit - did I write that. Fuck yeah I did. LOL

This place has been a treasure to learn from. I used to pay no mind to stanzas and syllables. Just writing down my truth. But learning from people you respect and admire is a blessing for me.

I had to laugh at your  "Aw shit....Ya done went and did it."
hahahah.   Hell Yeah buddy:)

Thanks for all of your comments and the RL
Woop Woop!!! hahah

Hey Relic

Ha! My first inner thought when I started writing. Too cool.
Ink flowing forth through words spoken. Well said!!!

Thanks for the RL and comment!!!
Woop Woop