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true love

okay girl tell boy she loves him
boy says it back
girl said he means the world to him
boy said it back and truly means it
boy fall in love with the girl
girl said the same ....
.....
boy walk to girls house
boy goes in the house
girl doesnt know
boy she girl fucking another boy
boy starts crying and go back to him house
girl finish fucking
girl feels bad because she LOVE her boyfriend
girl was going to boy house to say sorry
.....
boy write a note ....
and then gets a gun and kill himself
....
girl gets there and see the body and freak out
girl see the note and read it ....
.... she starts crying
.... so she grabs the gun and kill herself
... the two was found dead handing hand


...... the note
~to the love of my life ..... i love you why did you do it .... i did everything for you .... i help you.... i was there for you when you cried ... but if this is what you want ... then ill let you go so you can be happy with that guy you fucked .... and for me i guess this with be the last thing i well ever say .... even thought you cheated on me i still love you that why im killing my self ....bye
love
      ray ~
......the end with the note
... a couple of day before she has gotten trouble
and if she didnt do what she did
the gang would have killed the one she loves ....
so she did to save him
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