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Fire Science
giving me
a wimpy
ineffective
pussy-assed
decaf spanking
when i'm
riled up
angry
and frustrated as fuck
is like feeding
a lion
a tiny meatball
being alone
when i'm
riled up
angry
and frustrated as fuck
is like screaming
on a wave-tossed raft
in the middle of the ocean
between Hawaii and Japan
at midnight
with no ships in sight
being with you
when i'm
riled up
angry
and frustrated as fuck
is like fire science
you light a fire
to consume mine
not stopping
until my ass
is buring bright red
ablaze with pain
destroying my anger
leveling my frustration
leaving me
calm
glowing
basking in the warmth
quietly
submissively
at your feet
a wimpy
ineffective
pussy-assed
decaf spanking
when i'm
riled up
angry
and frustrated as fuck
is like feeding
a lion
a tiny meatball
being alone
when i'm
riled up
angry
and frustrated as fuck
is like screaming
on a wave-tossed raft
in the middle of the ocean
between Hawaii and Japan
at midnight
with no ships in sight
being with you
when i'm
riled up
angry
and frustrated as fuck
is like fire science
you light a fire
to consume mine
not stopping
until my ass
is buring bright red
ablaze with pain
destroying my anger
leveling my frustration
leaving me
calm
glowing
basking in the warmth
quietly
submissively
at your feet
Published 28th Jan 2022
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28th Jan 2022 6:00pm
Your words of fire
Burns bright
Sets my world on fire
You arouse my desires
With the glow of your soul
Live long and prosper
Love n peace
💜💜💜💜🙏
Burns bright
Sets my world on fire
You arouse my desires
With the glow of your soul
Live long and prosper
Love n peace
💜💜💜💜🙏
29th Jan 2022 2:23pm
29th Jan 2022 1:52pm
Wow, was really getting into it when the amazing last line appeared. Great poem. Hugs and peace, oral
29th Jan 2022 2:23pm
Ah yes, spank you out of the anger zone into the lust zone. Sage advice, not for the faint at heart.
You make a valid observation in the change in attitude to help with mental relief. Kinda like a pressure release valve.
Welcome to DUP. A fine poem.
You make a valid observation in the change in attitude to help with mental relief. Kinda like a pressure release valve.
Welcome to DUP. A fine poem.
29th Jan 2022 11:25pm
Thank you for the nice feedback. You definitely understand what I expressed.
2nd Feb 2022 1:27am
"E.E. Cummingz you slow poke R U comin' or wut !?!
T.S. Elliot E.T. Phon3 Hom3 Now kiss muh Butt" <3
8 Luv, Doc Ahk 8
T.S. Elliot E.T. Phon3 Hom3 Now kiss muh Butt" <3
8 Luv, Doc Ahk 8
18th Mar 2022 9:47pm
19th Mar 2022 1:04am
Then it is official PS, thank you. Although not sure ready to be aired to the American public...
