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Normality
I don't understand my pain
It's just there to tingle my little veins
To the welcome of
As I gasp yet yawn in the wake.
Shadows fell their wonder in black
As I walk my gait towards another faith.
Cut my my cloth and shape my form, behemoth
Let me know what you want from me now.
Slave to the wealth in my head
It's just there to tingle my little veins
To the welcome of
As I gasp yet yawn in the wake.
Shadows fell their wonder in black
As I walk my gait towards another faith.
Cut my my cloth and shape my form, behemoth
Let me know what you want from me now.
Slave to the wealth in my head
Published 27th Jan 2022
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27th Jan 2022 11:29am
Loved that line, "Slave to the wealth in y head."
You captured what so many of us have felt.
You captured what so many of us have felt.
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- Edited 27th Jan 2022 4:17pm
27th Jan 2022 4:15pm
To take the 'pen' and write it out; meaning, you show the reader where the pain has taken you mentally, physically and emotionally, which is some freaking wicked empowerment, I believe.... I hope doing so, that it allows for some catharsis your way..... The (your) truths of each line are so impactfully and descriptively spilled onto the page, really making a statement.... One that resonates and is leaves a familiar essence ...
It has been waaaaay toooooo long, my friend 🙏🏻
So fucking great seeing you. I hope you stick around a bit cos I love reading and...
I hear you.
🌹 - 💙
B
It has been waaaaay toooooo long, my friend 🙏🏻
So fucking great seeing you. I hope you stick around a bit cos I love reading and...
I hear you.
🌹 - 💙
B
27th Jan 2022 7:11pm
It has been too long! I have missed spilling my words to this page.
But most of all I have missed you, because you have this utmost insight to my words that spell me. I read your comments and they unravel my head...in the best way!
I'm in a better place, I think...but we always think...but I THINK i'm there. Hopefully.
You help a lot... I will be back here and there
But most of all I have missed you, because you have this utmost insight to my words that spell me. I read your comments and they unravel my head...in the best way!
I'm in a better place, I think...but we always think...but I THINK i'm there. Hopefully.
You help a lot... I will be back here and there
