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Not A Love (Poem)
This is not
A love poem
I don't know you
Though at times
I've wondered
What you're
Really like
Aside from all
Your flirtatious stares
You might even
Want to know
Me too
No, this is
Not a love poem
Not in the usual sense
It could end up
Being one
If it's meant
To be
Perhaps....
A love poem
I don't know you
Though at times
I've wondered
What you're
Really like
Aside from all
Your flirtatious stares
You might even
Want to know
Me too
No, this is
Not a love poem
Not in the usual sense
It could end up
Being one
If it's meant
To be
Perhaps....
Published 24th Jan 2022
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25th Jan 2022 1:07am
I know this feeling well, my dear. I think we all have! You did a great job writing it out for us, so we can say "ah, amen!".
26th Jan 2022 6:57pm
Anonymous
- Edited 19th Jul 2023 3:46am
25th Jan 2022 1:11am
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26th Jan 2022 6:59pm
Thank you for taking the time to read and respond to my poem. I loved what you said.
Anonymous
- Edited 19th Jul 2023 3:46am
26th Jan 2022 7:05pm
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25th Jan 2022 3:51am
Dear F,
I like your style. A little flirty. A little playing hard to get. Moreover, a lot cautious. I liked how you present hope with being careful of giving your heart too quickly. It’s a lovely write of thoughtful attentiveness. H🌷
I like your style. A little flirty. A little playing hard to get. Moreover, a lot cautious. I liked how you present hope with being careful of giving your heart too quickly. It’s a lovely write of thoughtful attentiveness. H🌷
13th May 2022 11:01am
Dear H,
I got so far behind in responding to the comments friends have left it is taking a while to catch up. I always love it when I find that you have stopped by and left your thoughts on my page. Thank you for that and for your wonderful supportiveness. I appreciate you!
Faith
I got so far behind in responding to the comments friends have left it is taking a while to catch up. I always love it when I find that you have stopped by and left your thoughts on my page. Thank you for that and for your wonderful supportiveness. I appreciate you!
Faith
25th Jan 2022 2:57pm
