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Mumble
The future is a bumble
Master plan did crumble
Life is a rumble
Sent for tumble
Get up but stumble
Bravado lost to humble
Self-worth a fumble
Remedy a jumble
Intimacy not even a grumble
Now I sit here and mumble
Master plan did crumble
Life is a rumble
Sent for tumble
Get up but stumble
Bravado lost to humble
Self-worth a fumble
Remedy a jumble
Intimacy not even a grumble
Now I sit here and mumble
Published 24th Jan 2022
Author's Note
I’m good – doodling while drudgingly working on my computer. I mumbled something and decided to see if I could write using the word mumble. Started off dark so stayed with it.
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24th Jan 2022 8:32pm
24th Jan 2022 9:57pm
Anonymous
24th Jan 2022 8:34pm
Nice and playful! X
24th Jan 2022 9:58pm
Anonymous
24th Jan 2022 8:37pm
Your self-worth. Make it great. 'Cause you Know It Is...
24th Jan 2022 9:58pm
Anonymous
25th Jan 2022 1:26am
Never given unless meant.
24th Jan 2022 10:25pm
I think that mumbling is a ploy... in a very effective attempt to draw in closer, those who you wish to...... investigate!! 🕵🏻
088's finest tricks of the trade....
Clever and enjoyable write, Leo!
🌹-B
088's finest tricks of the trade....
Clever and enjoyable write, Leo!
🌹-B
25th Jan 2022 1:30pm
May be time to bring you in for an interrogation to determine what else you know of our organization! 😉😘🕵️♂️⛓🕯
Thank-you for your comment, Ms Blue.
Thank-you for your comment, Ms Blue.
24th Jan 2022 11:35pm
Don't you just love it when tumble out and you turn them into something as clever as this. A fine poem!
Anonymous
25th Jan 2022 1:27am
Tumbling is the only way to go, i tjink...
25th Jan 2022 5:09am
Ten lines of pure odyssey my wandering poet, this is ingenious and poetically composed in all its aspect.
25th Jan 2022 1:32pm
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22nd Apr 2022 2:52am
I like that you stayed with it. Definitely a good read. I love me some rhyming.
LJ
LJ
22nd Apr 2022 12:55pm
18th May 2022 5:38pm
Oh seducing my mind with the rhyme. :p I hear the mumble and it tells me the master plan is still in hand. Just sitting here in the darkness with you.
18th May 2022 6:27pm
25th Sep 2022 5:38pm
Good one! Made me laugh a lot. Oh the rhymes to flow and I want to start mumbling and see what I come up with too. lol
Careful mumbling can be contagious. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for reading, commenting and adding to your list.
26th Sep 2022 3:01pm
Fantastic mumblings in cool rhyming ramblings. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
26th Sep 2022 3:02pm
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14th Oct 2022 9:27am
Dear L,
I enjoyed this very much. It kind of has a rap-like feel to it the way you can speak-sing it. Mumbling and doodling have proved very creative for you 😉
H🌷
I enjoyed this very much. It kind of has a rap-like feel to it the way you can speak-sing it. Mumbling and doodling have proved very creative for you 😉
H🌷
14th Oct 2022 4:25pm
26th Jan 2023 3:06am
I enjoy it when a word comes to thought and you just have to go with it. This is a fun rhyme and read and especially knowing it resulted because of work. The creative mind always wins.
27th Jan 2023 3:19am
Thanks NG for the comment. Not sure about my creativity but it did provide a break in work concentration.
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