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how careless of me
if i told you a
hundred times
a day, "i love
you."
nay...
a thousand
times a day,
i would regret
that it wasn't
a thousand
and one.
Published 24th Jan 2022
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Anonymous
24th Jan 2022 1:27am
Awww......☺
💙-it!
xo
B
💙-it!
xo
B
24th Jan 2022 1:33am
Sometimes you have to say what is in your heart straight up.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
24th Jan 2022 1:30am
24th Jan 2022 1:34am
24th Jan 2022 3:34am
Dear BK,
Love, redemption, forgiveness, I could use this poem for all the aforementioned with minor word substitutions. I love where your words guide your reader. Lovely write. H🌷
Love, redemption, forgiveness, I could use this poem for all the aforementioned with minor word substitutions. I love where your words guide your reader. Lovely write. H🌷
24th Jan 2022 4:18am
Anonymous
24th Jan 2022 4:16am
I Lurve You!
24th Jan 2022 4:20am
2nd Mar 2022 4:36pm
We have to appreciate this for the simplicity and brevity but mostly for it's profound effect.
Excellent.
Excellent.
5th Mar 2022 3:08am
