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Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
I woke this morning feeling like I failed you
Thinking too much of myself
You're short on emotion
So I fill in spaces
Maybe that should remain open
As the sun rose the failure fell away
There was food in the pantry
Coffee waiting to be drunk
Redemption trying to be taken
Thinking too much of myself
You're short on emotion
So I fill in spaces
Maybe that should remain open
As the sun rose the failure fell away
There was food in the pantry
Coffee waiting to be drunk
Redemption trying to be taken
Author's Note
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
21st Jan 2022 3:35pm
Re. Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
Sometimes emotions just fall out when there's nothing left to lose, I just let it fly
Appreciate the comment and RL LDF
Appreciate the comment and RL LDF
Re. Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
21st Jan 2022 3:48pm
good morning dearest Poet
I love this it's beautiful ❤️
this morning I'm working on painting
I added a poem to...
it's interesting to write on you art...
in any case it's always a good morning for me when you're here...
I love this it's beautiful ❤️
this morning I'm working on painting
I added a poem to...
it's interesting to write on you art...
in any case it's always a good morning for me when you're here...
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Re. Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
21st Jan 2022 3:51pm
Good Morning Brenda
I appreciate your comment and I’m glad you are painting a lot again. I’m in a creative period myself between art and writing. It’s winter here and between that and the pandemic there’s a lot of inside time !!
Appreciate the RL
Thank you
❤️
I appreciate your comment and I’m glad you are painting a lot again. I’m in a creative period myself between art and writing. It’s winter here and between that and the pandemic there’s a lot of inside time !!
Appreciate the RL
Thank you
❤️
Re. Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
21st Jan 2022 4:16pm
Re: Re. Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
21st Jan 2022 4:19pm
Re. Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
21st Jan 2022 5:31pm
Hi Poet,how u doing?
I like "You're short on emotion. So I fill in spaces" line.
Love the entwined tapestry of penetrating words,2 form a quilted poem.
Great Poet! X
I like "You're short on emotion. So I fill in spaces" line.
Love the entwined tapestry of penetrating words,2 form a quilted poem.
Great Poet! X
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Re. Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
21st Jan 2022 6:03pm
Thanks so much Wired 6
I had a lot to work with but I condensed it as the poem would allow
Appreciate your comment
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I had a lot to work with but I condensed it as the poem would allow
Appreciate your comment
XX
Re. Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
Re: Re. Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
21st Jan 2022 7:25pm
Re. Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
22nd Jan 2022 2:54am
Awh... this - filling in spaces that should remain open.
So well said. Don't feel you are the only one that does this.
It's not easy. At least not for me when it comes to emotional stuff.
The pic is great!! I think I see the coffee in it:)
So well said. Don't feel you are the only one that does this.
It's not easy. At least not for me when it comes to emotional stuff.
The pic is great!! I think I see the coffee in it:)
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Re: Re. Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
22nd Jan 2022 3:24am
There's definitely black coffee there
I only drink half a cup in the morning and usually with a drop of half and half and a little whipped cream. It's a wanna be Cappacinno.
Some personal information about this madman.
I've gotten more emotional as time rolls on, you're right, it's not easy...
Thx ❤
I only drink half a cup in the morning and usually with a drop of half and half and a little whipped cream. It's a wanna be Cappacinno.
Some personal information about this madman.
I've gotten more emotional as time rolls on, you're right, it's not easy...
Thx ❤
Re. Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
26th Jan 2022 00:44am
Re: Re. Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
26th Jan 2022 1:18am
Re. Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
26th Jan 2022 2:29am
Re: Re. Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
26th Jan 2022 2:44am
A little vulnerable
Sometimes it slips out and sometimes I want it to ...
Thx Lj
Sometimes it slips out and sometimes I want it to ...
Thx Lj
Re. Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
26th Jan 2022 5:06pm
I love this so much. I'm not going to analyze... I'll just say I completely identify with it and it goes straight to my heart (and RL).
❤❤❤k
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Re: Re. Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
26th Jan 2022 5:21pm
Wow
Just wow
Maybe I will write again one day
Glad this rang the bell
A vulnerable festival if you will ...
Thx k
Xxx
Just wow
Maybe I will write again one day
Glad this rang the bell
A vulnerable festival if you will ...
Thx k
Xxx
Re. Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
1st Mar 2022 11:47pm
I like that amidst the musings of this piece, there is depth, as if it asks to look closer and feel the emotions.
The again, you do have a gift for putting these out there and making the audience ask for more.
BIG LIKE.
The again, you do have a gift for putting these out there and making the audience ask for more.
BIG LIKE.
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Re: Re. Coffee Waiting to be Drunk
2nd Mar 2022 3:46am
I try to challenge the audience, this might have been one of those times !!
Thanks Wally
Thanks Wally