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Senryu

 
I looked at the mirror
Mirror looked at my face,  
I look for my own trace,
***
I looked at my image,
It is a pilgrimage,  
I am now vintage,
***
I shiver with fear,
He takes me in arm,
I am calm and warm.  
***
I am sleeping in a bed,
He touched and caressed,  
I bloomed and smiled,
***  
He reached my lips,  
I honoured with a kiss,
We are in absolute bliss.  
***
She is a cindering amber,
She burns in her chamber,  
She holds on love-member.
***
She is on her four,
She desires a lot more,
I loved her and adore.
***  
She is with freckle marks,
She is covered with stars,
She is a galaxy with sparks.
***
She has a long red hair,
Her skin is yellow and pale,  
She reacts like ginger-ale.  
***
Her eyes are brown and blue,  
Her lips are thick and pink,
Her smile is sly and concocts.
***  
She is a cindering amber,
She burns in her chamber,  
She holds on love-member.
***  
She is standing silently and cries,
Dreams floats in her teary eyes,
When I look at her, she smiles.
Written by KristopherSanders (Kristopher Sander)
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Author's Note
I tried to write Senryu like Haiku of my observation of others and their reaction. Please let me have your feed back.
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