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Read It Aloud. Allowed 2 Yourself!
Read it,
And read it again.
What the hell is this poem that you've penned.
My guess is that you didn't read it out loud,
the ascension of the constanants and vowels.
My guess is you never proof red it.
( Did I mention that I'm the best poetry editor in this world).
Anyway,when you feel you've finished with your poem.
You need 2 read it aloud 2 yourself,2 hear how it sounds.
2 check for grammatical and punctuation mistaakes--
like the incorrect spelling of "mistakes", that you've just written down!
" Mistakes",doesn't have 2 "A's".
It's spelt-- M.I.S.T.A.K.E.'S.
OK-- So I won't go on about this right now.
Except 2 say:
A mistake,is a mistake,is a mistake,is a mistake.
And all writers make mistake,upon mistake,upon mistake,upon fucking mistake!
Ok-- I'm sorry. I'm still going on right now.
I'll stop illuminating your mistake,
round and round.
But finally,just 2 say,
I need 2 say.
Every writer makes mistaakes,mistaakes,mistaakes.
Aaaaaaah! You've spelt it wrong again.
Shit! Are you dumber than the dumb-- de--dum,my friend.
©Wired6. 4/1/2022
And read it again.
What the hell is this poem that you've penned.
My guess is that you didn't read it out loud,
the ascension of the constanants and vowels.
My guess is you never proof red it.
( Did I mention that I'm the best poetry editor in this world).
Anyway,when you feel you've finished with your poem.
You need 2 read it aloud 2 yourself,2 hear how it sounds.
2 check for grammatical and punctuation mistaakes--
like the incorrect spelling of "mistakes", that you've just written down!
" Mistakes",doesn't have 2 "A's".
It's spelt-- M.I.S.T.A.K.E.'S.
OK-- So I won't go on about this right now.
Except 2 say:
A mistake,is a mistake,is a mistake,is a mistake.
And all writers make mistake,upon mistake,upon mistake,upon fucking mistake!
Ok-- I'm sorry. I'm still going on right now.
I'll stop illuminating your mistake,
round and round.
But finally,just 2 say,
I need 2 say.
Every writer makes mistaakes,mistaakes,mistaakes.
Aaaaaaah! You've spelt it wrong again.
Shit! Are you dumber than the dumb-- de--dum,my friend.
©Wired6. 4/1/2022
Published 15th Jan 2022
| Edited 2nd Feb 2022
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15th Jan 2022 4:27am
This is super relatable even if you are editing your own work and it’s not someone else doing it I can totally see this being the voice in my head . I also like that it’s not something we see other people write about all the time, I think it would be interesting to hear this read aloud. Great work.
15th Jan 2022 6:05pm
Hi burningbutterfly,hope ur well?
Thank you very much for your constructive comment.
And glad you could relate.
X
Thank you very much for your constructive comment.
And glad you could relate.
X
