Read It Aloud. Allowed 2 Yourself!
And read it again.
What the hell is this poem that you've penned.
My guess is that you didn't read it out loud,
the ascension of the constanants and vowels.
My guess is you never proof red it.
( Did I mention that I'm the best poetry editor in this world).
Anyway,when you feel you've finished with your poem.
You need 2 read it aloud 2 yourself,2 hear how it sounds.
2 check for grammatical and punctuation mistaakes--
like the incorrect spelling of "mistakes", that you've just written down!
" Mistakes",doesn't have 2 "A's".
It's spelt-- M.I.S.T.A.K.E.'S.
OK-- So I won't go on about this right now.
Except 2 say:
A mistake,is a mistake,is a mistake,is a mistake.
And all writers make mistake,upon mistake,upon mistake,upon fucking mistake!
Ok-- I'm sorry. I'm still going on right now.
I'll stop illuminating your mistake,
round and round.
But finally,just 2 say,
I need 2 say.
Every writer makes mistaakes,mistaakes,mistaakes.
Aaaaaaah! You've spelt it wrong again.
Shit! Are you dumber than the dumb-- de--dum,my friend.