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Trails
there are animal
tracks in the snow
on the side of the
hill as I work
and I wonder how
the animals fare in
the deep freeze of
winter
and at the same I
wonder how you
fare during your day
do I cross your mind?
Do I occupy your moments?
thoughts crisscross
in a never ending
pattern like these tracks
in the snow and invariably
my thoughts follow
a path back to you
tracks in the snow
on the side of the
hill as I work
and I wonder how
the animals fare in
the deep freeze of
winter
and at the same I
wonder how you
fare during your day
do I cross your mind?
Do I occupy your moments?
thoughts crisscross
in a never ending
pattern like these tracks
in the snow and invariably
my thoughts follow
a path back to you
Published 14th Jan 2022
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15th Jan 2022 00:16am
I really enjoyed this for the ambiguity are these people together or apart? Does one want to be with the other? I think the openness allows for a very broad audience relatability so many people will see so many different things depending on whatever situation they are in…I’m rambling anyway I think it’s really cool!
15th Jan 2022 00:49am
Thank you very much. I leave it up to the reader to use their imagination. Rambling is okay, too lol.
