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Just Can’t Hate You…..
yet I know there might be a “should” somewhere in time…..
You’ve come & gone so many times, over misunderstandings never wanting to hear an explanation.
Forgiveness my heart has always given (so I am told), learned a valuable lesson, between giving forgiveness and being forgiven.
Now that I’ve released all that and let the wind whirl it away.
Heres what I want to say, after all, I am free, to write whatever I wish…..rite?
there’s a place within me
that will always be yours
this solemn peace I feel
cause you brought out
my personality, strength
whirled my doubt away
oh….let’s not forget
passion I’ve never
known my ink released
or feel when darkness
captured my heart
inked words set it free
Thanks for the wings 💜
© 2022 Flowergirl
You’ve come & gone so many times, over misunderstandings never wanting to hear an explanation.
Forgiveness my heart has always given (so I am told), learned a valuable lesson, between giving forgiveness and being forgiven.
Now that I’ve released all that and let the wind whirl it away.
Heres what I want to say, after all, I am free, to write whatever I wish…..rite?
there’s a place within me
that will always be yours
this solemn peace I feel
cause you brought out
my personality, strength
whirled my doubt away
oh….let’s not forget
passion I’ve never
known my ink released
or feel when darkness
captured my heart
inked words set it free
Thanks for the wings 💜
© 2022 Flowergirl
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Re. Just Can’t Hate You…..
Anonymous
14th Jan 2022 5:19pm
I’ll hate for you lol. That way you get to heaven and I’ll stir the coals below 🤣😂🤣😂💜
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14th Jan 2022 5:27pm
Haha! When the devil meets you……he’ll plead on his knees at the pearly gates to be let in…..I’m sure LMAO! Luv ya Sister……purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Just Can’t Hate You…..
Wow! What an adoration, admiration and space in your heart for the one who takes you out of your darkness and take you on the wings.
An expression of innermost feeling.
Love it.
KS
An expression of innermost feeling.
Love it.
KS
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16th Jan 2022 5:43pm
Hey KS…….thank you for making me smile……..I admire many souls……but not many who have stepped in the darkness and took me my the heart and led me out…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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16th Jan 2022 11:24pm
Thanks. Love has the power to bring light and hope and pull us out of the darkness. Love you. KA
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17th Jan 2022 00:42am
Re. Just Can’t Hate You…..
14th Jan 2022 9:11pm
Such forgiveness makes yiu both beautiful inside and out my Purple princess
Sending hugs across the void
Ron xx
Sending hugs across the void
Ron xx
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16th Jan 2022 5:51pm
Awe Ron…….thank you for the hugs…….to see your smile upon my ink gives me inspiration…….honored by the RL…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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14th Jan 2022 11:13pm
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16th Jan 2022 7:13pm
Hey Phantom……..thank you…….it’s my belief that gets me to heaven…….there’s enough hate in the world…….don’t want to add to it…….I will never stop believing in or luving souls……they taught me to believe in me…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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16th Jan 2022 11:50pm
Re. Just Can’t Hate You…..
Dear FG,
I admired the ability to find a positive in relationship that perhaps didn’t end up according to plan. Continued forgiveness is an extension of love so deep, all I can say is “wow”. I am your humble student wanting to know how you did that? Lovely write. H🌷
I admired the ability to find a positive in relationship that perhaps didn’t end up according to plan. Continued forgiveness is an extension of love so deep, all I can say is “wow”. I am your humble student wanting to know how you did that? Lovely write. H🌷
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Dear H…….your words move me…….I have a speech impediment…….I was always teased by those around me…….told I would never be nothing by family…….I hated me…….I was different than others……..well we all have differences in someway…….because of a soul in my life made a difference……it turned me around…….determined to prove to me I was worth luving or anything at all…….when something is a miff in my life……it hurts me deeply…….specially when it’s over a misunderstanding and I can’t make it right. I’ve learned how to forgive…….cause when you don’t…….it eats at you till emotionally and mentally you’re not you any more…….”it’s not how others treat that matters so much, it’s how you deal with it, how you allow souls to change you within yourself!” Flower 🌸 So I forgive……learn to be a friend to the silence others leave…….while knowing I forgave…….if they don’t chose to come back…….then I know I tried to make a mend. Hope this explains what lays deep within my soul…….I’m like any other soul really……..I’ve just learned how to deal with pain……emptiness……sadness…….blessing of feeling the passion that has captured me. Thank you for a thought provoking response……..purple luv & hugs xo :) 💜
Re. Just Can’t Hate You…..
15th Jan 2022 8:51am
Heartfelt and beautiful.
In regard to writing poetry, I feel that the first poetic fruits
are often surfaced in "relationship settings"...
But this expands the mind, beyond this point,
where a spectrum of ink may flow.
In regard to writing poetry, I feel that the first poetic fruits
are often surfaced in "relationship settings"...
But this expands the mind, beyond this point,
where a spectrum of ink may flow.
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Re: Re. Just Can’t Hate You…..
16th Jan 2022 8:33pm
Hey Cipher……..yes relationships do move the ink most times…….for it’s a release of emotions in me that only I can feel……so I write just that…….thank you for gracing my page with your thoughts……..purple luv & hugs xo :)
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17th Jan 2022 8:21am
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17th Jan 2022 10:23pm
Hey Poe…….a blessing to see you “lurking” around my ink…….thank you for smiling upon me…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Just Can’t Hate You…..
17th Jan 2022 5:27pm
What we say does reflect on us,Mathew 15:18 But the things that come out of a person’s mouth come from the heart, and these defile them. " I Love where you hear is at with this one"
Your words of forgiveness are a great encouragement to follow Gods commandments, for we are all sinners! Mathew 6:15: But if you do not forgive others their sins, your Father will not forgive your sins." This is part of having an abundant life"
Our deeds do not get us into heaven, only the gift of grace and mercy of God can do that.
Your words of forgiveness are a great encouragement to follow Gods commandments, for we are all sinners! Mathew 6:15: But if you do not forgive others their sins, your Father will not forgive your sins." This is part of having an abundant life"
Our deeds do not get us into heaven, only the gift of grace and mercy of God can do that.
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17th Jan 2022 11:06pm
Hey TIG…….I humbling thank you for the verses my friend…….God has blessed my life so much (as you know)…….I know He has you……your heart and life has been changed by His glory and luv……yes believing in Jesus is the only way to heaven…….thank you again for a great response…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Just Can’t Hate You…..
Sounds bitter-sweet. Sorry for the simplistic comment but as you've already gone in-depth with this write, to me, it speaks for itself. Superb 10th anniversary poem also, I might add.
No one could blame you for wanting a break now. 😉
No one could blame you for wanting a break now. 😉
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17th Jan 2022 11:51pm
Awe thank you Billy…….just seeing your smile upon my ink always blesses me…….emotions are getting to me……I thank you again for the support……purple luv & hugs xo :)
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8th Feb 2022 1:46am
Hey Marks…….I’m glad to see your smile upon my ink…….thank you……fly safe and let the ink flow……purple luv & hugs xo :)
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9th Feb 2022 00:33am
Re. Just Can’t Hate You…..
12th Mar 2022 8:25pm
Fine muse and you expressed it superbly. Forgiveness and the soaring feel towards the end. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
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12th Mar 2022 8:47pm
Hey ZK…….nice to see you visit my page, life is too short to harbor hate, I can’t change what happened but I feel better for have had such a man in my life, thank you, purple luv & hugs xo :)