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the night
the night is mystical with tears
wept by lost women
and lonely men
and every other type of soul
for mysticism’s not just flute
and other instruments of wood
but also instruments of bone
and toenails
and ducts
wept by lost women
and lonely men
and every other type of soul
for mysticism’s not just flute
and other instruments of wood
but also instruments of bone
and toenails
and ducts
Published 14th Jan 2022
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14th Jan 2022 00:54am
14th Jan 2022 1:12am
14th Jan 2022 10:39am
Being such a quaint write, consider a synonym for one of those "instruments". You're onto something dynamic here; certainly a level of poetry I rarely if ever achieve.
28th Feb 2022 1:01am
