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Still fight'n
Still fighting
Despite the enlightenment
Sarcasm to calm the rights I ment
Never wanted to be a worry
I'm sorry
Never wanted to state an apology
So find a way to bury me
In the shit that I spit at the heavenly
Fuck it
I know I'm heading to the underground
Warm with the rock sounds
Slamed damn I'm just another wrecked man
Drawing in the falling sands
Of time
So shine
Build me a shrine of shit that you think I'm into
Break the deli delinquents that aspired to
Be me , be free , freedom at a cost is like a cheap drink
Stop , think
I'm on the brink of a break down
Break sounds like I never went round
Hahaha
Hope you find this shit funny cos fuck me I'm shit out of money and nothing that you would ever even want
But I'm still breathing
Fuck I miss Megan
She was a free soul
Had me deep in the all know
I'd give my life to hold her one more time
Fuck it
I'm fine
Blah blah fuck I shouldn't be writing
Xx - U53L355
Despite the enlightenment
Sarcasm to calm the rights I ment
Never wanted to be a worry
I'm sorry
Never wanted to state an apology
So find a way to bury me
In the shit that I spit at the heavenly
Fuck it
I know I'm heading to the underground
Warm with the rock sounds
Slamed damn I'm just another wrecked man
Drawing in the falling sands
Of time
So shine
Build me a shrine of shit that you think I'm into
Break the deli delinquents that aspired to
Be me , be free , freedom at a cost is like a cheap drink
Stop , think
I'm on the brink of a break down
Break sounds like I never went round
Hahaha
Hope you find this shit funny cos fuck me I'm shit out of money and nothing that you would ever even want
But I'm still breathing
Fuck I miss Megan
She was a free soul
Had me deep in the all know
I'd give my life to hold her one more time
Fuck it
I'm fine
Blah blah fuck I shouldn't be writing
Xx - U53L355
Published 9th Jan 2022
Author's Note
Yeah I'm drunk at a pub on a Sunday sesh . Mill my liver .
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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9th Jan 2022 2:31pm
Hey U
Don't stop
Don't stop
Don't stop writing
It's when we face life's shit
It's then we write our strongest poetry ever
Take heart in that
The poems you write
Often helps another be right too
Many would wish
They could say
What you write
Is what they feel too
You spread your strength
With your writing prose you may not know it
But you help others
Through their shit too..
You wrote a great poem U
Well done
Love n peace
💜💜💜💜
Don't stop
Don't stop
Don't stop writing
It's when we face life's shit
It's then we write our strongest poetry ever
Take heart in that
The poems you write
Often helps another be right too
Many would wish
They could say
What you write
Is what they feel too
You spread your strength
With your writing prose you may not know it
But you help others
Through their shit too..
You wrote a great poem U
Well done
Love n peace
💜💜💜💜
9th Jan 2022 2:46pm
This comment made me cry a little , I was gonna make this my last haha , thankyou
I am a lil drunk even when I wrote this
I am a lil drunk even when I wrote this
Being drunk is a happy place
Most of the time
This I know
All too well
You see I went
For a Walk on the Wild side
With my friend Johnny
And we wet a Turkey
Well being drunk
As we happened
To be
We met a few more
Johnny J Jameson
And poor old Paddy
And you know what happened next
A fight broke out
The poor old Turkey got driwned
The contrary Paddy fell over
So we stole his drink too
That left my friend Walker
And Johnny J J
Who couldn't handle any more
So I was left to finish the lot
Which happened to take
Many a year
For me to see the light
That these were
No friends at all
So now I'm here
And I'd much rather be
Here with you
To tell my walking tail
Love n peace U
💜💜💜💜
Most of the time
This I know
All too well
You see I went
For a Walk on the Wild side
With my friend Johnny
And we wet a Turkey
Well being drunk
As we happened
To be
We met a few more
Johnny J Jameson
And poor old Paddy
And you know what happened next
A fight broke out
The poor old Turkey got driwned
The contrary Paddy fell over
So we stole his drink too
That left my friend Walker
And Johnny J J
Who couldn't handle any more
So I was left to finish the lot
Which happened to take
Many a year
For me to see the light
That these were
No friends at all
So now I'm here
And I'd much rather be
Here with you
To tell my walking tail
Love n peace U
💜💜💜💜
12th Jan 2022 12:59pm
Better not be your last poem you're submitting! Such talent should be shared, my friend.
14th Mar 2022 12:00pm
I love these visceral free flow pieces. The unedited, pure, good shit. Much needed.
Thank you for sharing :)
-M
Thank you for sharing :)
-M
