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Beautiful
It was a pendulum of shadows,
Over the sky of my eye -
Seemingly a simulation
In a chord of emotion
Emotive –
But it was
You
Across the votive
Candle
As you asked:
Am I just
More than you can handle.
And it was you
In the smiles
&
Cries – Comprised
Of times
Set about in the structure
Of my scenery
In lines
Of everything
Beauty
Because
Everything
About
You
Is
Beautiful
Published 8th Jan 2022
Author's Note
Inspired by "Bipolarity" by LDF...
And also this thing I was listening to...
As well as my direct experience...
and I just sort of went were the poem wanted to go.
And also this thing I was listening to...
As well as my direct experience...
and I just sort of went were the poem wanted to go.
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8th Jan 2022 9:06am
Dear CO,
I truly enjoy the flow of your writing and your authors notes. Your readers can see the initial thought and watch how you morph with it. Your opening line is such a beautiful intro to the piece. It’s mysterious and elegant at the same time. And then it becomes a dialogue of romantic wonder between the characters. Wonderful write. H🌷
I truly enjoy the flow of your writing and your authors notes. Your readers can see the initial thought and watch how you morph with it. Your opening line is such a beautiful intro to the piece. It’s mysterious and elegant at the same time. And then it becomes a dialogue of romantic wonder between the characters. Wonderful write. H🌷
9th Jan 2022 8:27am
Thank you H.
These are very beautiful words.
I very much appreciate your
thought provoking perspectives.
These are very beautiful words.
I very much appreciate your
thought provoking perspectives.
8th Jan 2022 3:29pm
9th Jan 2022 8:28am
9th Jan 2022 8:30am
