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IF ONLY YOU COULD SEE

It's a beautiful thing to be able to see the truth and the subconsciousness of a woman's, mind and heart and soul as you become more aware of each others thoughts and emotions and feelings. But yet the greatest thing is to understand  that beneath, the surface of her body and soul and mind lays layers of confidence and convictions. That sometimes comes with the hurt and pain and tears that still have scars. For example sometimes you can hear what her tears, are feeling when she is asleep in a deep sleep yet she will tell you. That it's nothing just memories of a past that held no actions. Because now she has found herself in a position where she has security and happiness, with joy and love and understanding with COMMITTMENT and COMMUNICATIONS. For sometimes life will put things into perspective and balance in her heart as it will feel beautiful and wonderful. For it is worth it to see the truth of a woman's mind and heart and soul, for there you will never see someone so beautiful and intelligent, with a sense of awareness and deep subconsciousness that she is a common woman. Yet if given the opportunity she will show you her wants and needs and desires. That she alone is willing to share with you as you both become, engaged and entwine in a sensual  beauty of the body and soul and mind.
Written by Stoney223 (WOLF BAY33)
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BENEATH THE SURFACE OF A WOMAN'S MIND AND HEART AND SOUL ARE THE VERY FABRIC OF HER LIFE AND WORLD, YET IF ONLY YOU COULD SEE BENEATH THE SURFACE OF HER BEAUTIFUL SPIRITUAL SOUL...AMAS SHAMEL
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