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Doing You

a scintillating surging thrust
slap and squelch, I feel I must
tell you I love what you do
I love also doing you

as disappearing egos merge
in rhythmic pulses...senses surge
ever closer to within
ecstatic union...we are in

synchronized sensations' rush
to explode...imploding us
recreating you and me
pleasure pleasing pleasantly

moans and groans and sighs, enthralled
intertwining passions called
to excite while being stirred
on the edge in a superb

teeter-totter, up and down
in and out and all around
breaking like a wave on shore
more and more and more and more

a scintillating surging thrust
slap and squelch, I feel I must
tell you I love what you do
I love also doing you
bcpoet
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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