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Over a glass of maroon
exfoliated from memories
held no longer sacred
a lackof love reversed my perspective
Strange, I can only ever remember being taken into the mouth of your shadow
Published 5th Jan 2022
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6th Jan 2022 2:15pm
8th Jan 2022 11:24am
Dear IW,
Intense and relatable. For me, that feeling of being overshadowed and minimized. I like the format of this poem with the different fonts. Each showcasing a different point being made. Great write and welcome to DU. H🌷
Intense and relatable. For me, that feeling of being overshadowed and minimized. I like the format of this poem with the different fonts. Each showcasing a different point being made. Great write and welcome to DU. H🌷
