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Dead
I collect thoughts like pebbles.
They rest in my head.
They lay dormant.
Gathering dusty hallucinations;
doubt, fear & procrastination.
I carry them in my skull,
a familiar comfort.
Imposters in my mind;
trying to reside triumphant.
All rational thoughts have been overtaken;
these sentiments will not be shaken.
Thoughts that long to be fed.
I wish they would just quit with their;
'I'd rather be...'
They rest in my head.
They lay dormant.
Gathering dusty hallucinations;
doubt, fear & procrastination.
I carry them in my skull,
a familiar comfort.
Imposters in my mind;
trying to reside triumphant.
All rational thoughts have been overtaken;
these sentiments will not be shaken.
Thoughts that long to be fed.
I wish they would just quit with their;
'I'd rather be...'
Published 4th Jan 2022
| Edited 1st May 2022
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4th Jan 2022 8:24pm
Beautifully captured my fillings as well. That space up there gets so cluttered with thoughts.
4th Jan 2022 10:55pm
5th Jan 2022 4:14pm
Oh how I intimately identify with this piece, dear Bethany. I wish there was a delete key for all the unnecessarily burdensome thoughts and memories that take up way too much valuable space in my noggin. This passage especially touched me,
"Gathering dusty hallucinations;
doubt, fear & procrastination."
Bravisima dear poet🌹
"Gathering dusty hallucinations;
doubt, fear & procrastination."
Bravisima dear poet🌹
5th Jan 2022 8:44pm
Thank you for your kind words! I take comfort in knowing we all feel alone sometimes & therefore we never are. ❤
10th Jan 2022 9:04pm
Lol. We need more cash for sure as it gives us options. I'm yet to be convinced that money makes us happier but I'd rather live miserably in comfort, lol.
Talk about a no brainer, right? 😉
Talk about a no brainer, right? 😉
18th Aug 2022 5:04pm
It's important to filter one's thoughts and be discerning as to those you allow to remain and act upon.
If we allow the, "Imposters in my mind; " to take hold we may be captured by the twitter effect where the mind becomes a sewer.
The are many who are the walking dead among us.
If we allow the, "Imposters in my mind; " to take hold we may be captured by the twitter effect where the mind becomes a sewer.
The are many who are the walking dead among us.
17th Jan 2023 5:10pm
👏 👏 👏!!! Brilliant 👏 ink spill queen 👸 please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings always 🙏
29th May 2023 10:53pm
those rerun thoughts
on binge watch
wondering
pondering
choices
made it not made
on binge watch
wondering
pondering
choices
made it not made
