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not an audition
Published 4th Jan 2022
Author's Note
“A poem should have the touch ... the way sunlight falls on Braille.” .......silent lotus
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5th Jan 2022 3:39am
dear Oral
so good to know you have been close to her aura
well wishes for the new year
silent lotus
so good to know you have been close to her aura
well wishes for the new year
silent lotus
9th Jan 2022 5:28pm
11th Jan 2022 5:11am
Dear SL,
This poem to me, reminds me when I see people in the subway station I can’t help but wonder and hope they’re protected. Not that they need me to hope this.
I have great admiration for the power and conviction of their speeches and passion. I’m sure I misunderstood your intended meaning but this poem so clearly called to mind my experience with NYC mass transit. Great write.
H🌷
This poem to me, reminds me when I see people in the subway station I can’t help but wonder and hope they’re protected. Not that they need me to hope this.
I have great admiration for the power and conviction of their speeches and passion. I’m sure I misunderstood your intended meaning but this poem so clearly called to mind my experience with NYC mass transit. Great write.
H🌷
21st Jan 2022 2:09pm
dear Honoria
to loiter ,, to listen ,, to remember
i'm grateful for your visit
a warm smile
silent lotus
to loiter ,, to listen ,, to remember
i'm grateful for your visit
a warm smile
silent lotus
