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Cummin' Full Circle
I have cause to wonder why
So many waking hours are spent
With you on my mind
After all this time
In my deepest R.E.M. sleep......
captured hues and transient colors
fill subconscious traces of space and time.......
.......I
...thought of you last night.
You didn't even know it.
(but then again maybe you did feel me creepin')
I was with you the way I wanted to be
Yes indeed, we both enjoyed it
A love so fierce, so passionate-so hot
I prayed to the heavens that it would never stop
Our sweat, our labored breath-it electrified the air
I awoke this morning still thinking that you were there......
.......the touching, the kisses
attacking you, biting you on your neck
I remember your voice, "Baby, what are you doing to me?"
Broken synapses as you wondered what I'd do to your body next.
The taste of you as my mouth and body continued their downward slide
Feeling you tremble, your stomach ripple as
I reach my reward between your fiery ......
.....thighs. I long to play in your Electric Lady Land
To leave a firm lick upon your swollen clit
Nipples swollen, tight and hard
my fingers squeezing them firmly
a soft refrain, "o my God...."
Mmmmmm.....that moment that I find your legs
draped across my broad shoulders.
My fingernails rake downward across the back of your sensuous thighs
The smoke of a distant fire smolders
And that creamy white ooze
Baby, put it on me. I must have a taste.
Mmmm.....your copious dripping moisture
Wet and sticky all over my face.
We've cum full circle
A connection that has lasted more than 20 years
Still caught up in a memory
I caress your face, I kiss your salty tears
Yes I'm reminded of those tears
ur innocent fears
Afraid of our love
The what ifs of....
......my large throbbing cock
pushing it's way deep into that youthful
virgin pussy
Taking your cherry, making you mine.
Nervous and trembling as I long to take you
time after time after time
Wondering......if we plant this seed, will it grow?
......a segue to now. Here we are again
Cummin' full circle
20 years older
trying to begin
I open my eyes to see
your gentle hands stroking my cock
and those same sensual lips
treacherously growing closer
to putting my manhood on lock
(....my goodness how time has changed)
There is such a fire raging
I'm throbbing, wanting penetration. To burst your bubble
with my steely black pen.
Straddled across my waist, I feel your heat
but after 20 years, you still won't let me in?
Cummin' full circle.........I remember this moment
just like the first time you left
20 years ago today
Yes I almost cried my self to death
And I'm a big, strong azz man
left here alone and feeling confused
As the door softly closes
You whisper......"I still and always will love only you"
Full circle. I feel just like *Wesley Deeds*
I still......
dream of,
deeply remember
I will always
want.....
....you.
So many waking hours are spent
With you on my mind
After all this time
In my deepest R.E.M. sleep......
captured hues and transient colors
fill subconscious traces of space and time.......
.......I
...thought of you last night.
You didn't even know it.
(but then again maybe you did feel me creepin')
I was with you the way I wanted to be
Yes indeed, we both enjoyed it
A love so fierce, so passionate-so hot
I prayed to the heavens that it would never stop
Our sweat, our labored breath-it electrified the air
I awoke this morning still thinking that you were there......
.......the touching, the kisses
attacking you, biting you on your neck
I remember your voice, "Baby, what are you doing to me?"
Broken synapses as you wondered what I'd do to your body next.
The taste of you as my mouth and body continued their downward slide
Feeling you tremble, your stomach ripple as
I reach my reward between your fiery ......
.....thighs. I long to play in your Electric Lady Land
To leave a firm lick upon your swollen clit
Nipples swollen, tight and hard
my fingers squeezing them firmly
a soft refrain, "o my God...."
Mmmmmm.....that moment that I find your legs
draped across my broad shoulders.
My fingernails rake downward across the back of your sensuous thighs
The smoke of a distant fire smolders
And that creamy white ooze
Baby, put it on me. I must have a taste.
Mmmm.....your copious dripping moisture
Wet and sticky all over my face.
We've cum full circle
A connection that has lasted more than 20 years
Still caught up in a memory
I caress your face, I kiss your salty tears
Yes I'm reminded of those tears
ur innocent fears
Afraid of our love
The what ifs of....
......my large throbbing cock
pushing it's way deep into that youthful
virgin pussy
Taking your cherry, making you mine.
Nervous and trembling as I long to take you
time after time after time
Wondering......if we plant this seed, will it grow?
......a segue to now. Here we are again
Cummin' full circle
20 years older
trying to begin
I open my eyes to see
your gentle hands stroking my cock
and those same sensual lips
treacherously growing closer
to putting my manhood on lock
(....my goodness how time has changed)
There is such a fire raging
I'm throbbing, wanting penetration. To burst your bubble
with my steely black pen.
Straddled across my waist, I feel your heat
but after 20 years, you still won't let me in?
Cummin' full circle.........I remember this moment
just like the first time you left
20 years ago today
Yes I almost cried my self to death
And I'm a big, strong azz man
left here alone and feeling confused
As the door softly closes
You whisper......"I still and always will love only you"
Full circle. I feel just like *Wesley Deeds*
I still......
dream of,
deeply remember
I will always
want.....
....you.
Published 7th Mar 2012
| Edited 8th Mar 2012
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8th Mar 2012 3:08am
8th Mar 2012 3:49am
Wow. What a beautiful write -- it has such depths and your feelings after all these years both physically and emotionally come across very nicely so much so that the reader is left feeling those feelings right along with you..... :)
9th Mar 2012 8:50am
9th Mar 2012 11:45am
9th Mar 2012 7:24pm
Man, totally love the subtle musical references and the way you are able to mesh "eros" with the "philos".
Hope Spring is treating you well!
Hope Spring is treating you well!
9th Mar 2012 9:00pm
Jazz said "Man, totally love the subtle musical references and the way you are able to mesh "eros" with the "philos"."
I am so glad that someone notes that they recognize this. It is deliberate. Thanks. Spring is going well. The music industry is quite busy for me at the moment.
I am so glad that someone notes that they recognize this. It is deliberate. Thanks. Spring is going well. The music industry is quite busy for me at the moment.
10th Mar 2012 10:15pm
21st Mar 2012 11:08am
Wow! This is more than erotic, beautifully pieced together to give the reader an explosive climax. Thumbs up!
21st Mar 2012 11:21am
Thank you beautiful lady. I sincerely hope that you read more of me. I mean that.
