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you
… once i was a lonely man
and i dream that i met you
i dreamed that i dreamed i fell in love…
i’m dreaming
i’m dreaming of you
thinking that you love me too..
me and You
just us two
it’s all about You
i’m dreaming
i’m dreaming of you
thinking that you love me too
me and You
till it’s through
just us two
You
(now…
be mine now)
and i dream that i met you
i dreamed that i dreamed i fell in love…
i’m dreaming
i’m dreaming of you
thinking that you love me too..
me and You
just us two
it’s all about You
i’m dreaming
i’m dreaming of you
thinking that you love me too
me and You
till it’s through
just us two
You
(now…
be mine now)
Published 25th Dec 2021
| Edited 27th Dec 2021
Author's Note
song:
forever love… soulmate.
Instrument, vocals
forever love… soulmate.
Instrument, vocals
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26th Dec 2021 3:43pm
I very much enjoyed the ethereal & dreamy ( no pun intended ) nature of this offering!
27th Dec 2021 12:24pm
28th Dec 2021 9:49pm
Loved the music and lyrics, great voices. It is a mood setter....Thanks for sharing, look forward to more. Hugs and peace, Oral (O)-(O)
30th Dec 2021 4:53am
thank you (O) for taking your time to experience the piece and so importantly.. to submit your well received feedback
i truly appreciate you.
OG Respect!
i truly appreciate you.
OG Respect!
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Dec 2022 10:45pm
29th Dec 2021 2:40am
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why thank you so much (audacious) for the time you took to experience the piece and most importantly.. posting the well received feedback.
humble and grateful.
OG Respect!
humble and grateful.
OG Respect!
21st Aug 2022 2:16pm
7th Sep 2022 1:12am
Thank You so very much my sister!
I truly appreciate your feedback
OG Respect
I truly appreciate your feedback
OG Respect
