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The Rain Contains
Rain on my window pain
Contains
&
Expounds
On my thoughts
That expand
Across the land and the sky
To the sea shore,
That dark ink embrace -
Serpentine
In my mind,
This seeker of shadows
In a state of
Face
&
Find:
Sanguine wine,
Comprised
Of
Height
&
Depth -
Depth
&
Height.
Published 25th Dec 2021
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Anonymous
25th Dec 2021 12:01pm
Nice conjuring of images and feelings... a moment caught in time and expanded upon.... true inspired artistry..
Wonderful!
Merry Christmas, C
🎄 - xo
Wonderful!
Merry Christmas, C
🎄 - xo
26th Dec 2021 00:05am
I particularly like the opening, rain tapping on a window really does conjure up vivid sensations.
26th Dec 2021 10:59am
Absolutely fantastic write... pulled me in... swept me away... stayed with me long after the reading and rereading...
