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Violet
the shimmer on her brow
the highlights in her hair
enliven those green eyes
that profess to me
I love you
when her lips
would never dare.
the highlights in her hair
enliven those green eyes
that profess to me
I love you
when her lips
would never dare.
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Re. Violet
21st Dec 2021 9:36pm
Love everything about this ursa... it is bold yet fragile at the same time... the structure highlights that perfectly...
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Re: Re. Violet
23rd Dec 2021 00:51am
thank you so much LilDragonFly. Means so much that you have shared these thoughts. I appreciate you.
warmly,
ursa 💜
warmly,
ursa 💜
Re. Violet
22nd Dec 2021 10:59am
Dear U,
Agree with LDF. Evocative and masterfully subtle. Well done, my friend. H🌷
Agree with LDF. Evocative and masterfully subtle. Well done, my friend. H🌷
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Re: Re. Violet
23rd Dec 2021 00:52am
Re. Violet
Anonymous
22nd Dec 2021 8:10pm
It's quaint enough to be considered minimalist, but explodes with the big bang of revelation. As readers, we get so much more than we expected in what is left unsaid.
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Re: Re. Violet
23rd Dec 2021 00:52am
thank you for stopping by JohnnyBlaze. Appreciate your kind comment.
warmly,
ursa 💜
warmly,
ursa 💜
Re. Violet
22nd Dec 2021 10:54pm
The tender openness and unafraid honesty are enchanting.... you have captured such an exquisite moment of thought and deed.... wow... just gorgeous, Ursa.
🌹 - 💙
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🌹 - 💙
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Re: Re. Violet
23rd Dec 2021 00:53am
thank you for your kind words Bluevelvete.
I appreciate you. I hope that you have been keeping well.
warmly,
ursa 💜
I appreciate you. I hope that you have been keeping well.
warmly,
ursa 💜
Re. Violet
27th Dec 2021 2:15pm
Yes, I've had that experience. Thanks for the reminder. Hugs and peace, Oral
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Re. Violet
1st May 2022 9:35pm
Beautiful, Ursa 🌸
You express perfectly the shy little violet … the one every amorous man secretly adores and seeks.
Beautifully done in Free Verse, with perfect linebreaks and syntax smooth as silk, you easily captivate the heart of your readers … especially, Me. ; )
I think the wonderful "her" and her reticent, "I love you" fits YOU to a romantically hearted tee!
Thank you, Dear Lady-Poet, ever-so warmly for the gentle joy! ⁓ Richard🖌
You express perfectly the shy little violet … the one every amorous man secretly adores and seeks.
Beautifully done in Free Verse, with perfect linebreaks and syntax smooth as silk, you easily captivate the heart of your readers … especially, Me. ; )
I think the wonderful "her" and her reticent, "I love you" fits YOU to a romantically hearted tee!
Thank you, Dear Lady-Poet, ever-so warmly for the gentle joy! ⁓ Richard🖌
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