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Your Smile
Bathed in fire,
consumed in the pyre
by the heat of a thousand suns
Yet why am I so underdone?
A mushroom cloud rises,
no more surprises
The whole world burning
has always been my yearning
Atoms splitting atoms,
stratum by stratum
Destroying hate
in the blazing light
of the thermonuclear force
of
your smile
consumed in the pyre
by the heat of a thousand suns
Yet why am I so underdone?
A mushroom cloud rises,
no more surprises
The whole world burning
has always been my yearning
Atoms splitting atoms,
stratum by stratum
Destroying hate
in the blazing light
of the thermonuclear force
of
your smile
Published 21st Dec 2021
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21st Dec 2021 7:48pm
24th Dec 2021 6:58am
Thank you so much but maybe not so original, someone mentioned the sunlight of a smile. Hugs
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
22nd Dec 2021 2:07am
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24th Dec 2021 7:05am
23rd Dec 2021 11:57am
I'm blinded by the passion that guides your pen! Ingenuity at it's best; impact fully felt.
24th Dec 2021 7:09am
A mind that won't shut up has been a curse that I'm learning can be an attribute. Your reply is beautiful, thank you.
23rd Dec 2021 5:55pm
Such a powerful and amazing tribute to the beauty of a lover's smile.... So much heat and passion!
24th Dec 2021 7:10am
As always, you find such deep meaning in my small poems. You are a gift, thank you.
