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blissful kissful
only
the blissful
kissful
of your
articulate
tongue
forever
my heart
has sprung
making my
life endeavour
of moments
naught
can sever
© Copyright 2021 December 15
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
the blissful
kissful
of your
articulate
tongue
forever
my heart
has sprung
making my
life endeavour
of moments
naught
can sever
© Copyright 2021 December 15
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
Published 19th Dec 2021
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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19th Dec 2021 2:09pm
20th Dec 2021 4:51am
Thank you, SO, for so summing up this little poem in two telling words (linked by conjunction). I appreciate your stop-by; not only have you stopped, but you have also left a footprint.
Sincerely
cab
Sincerely
cab
21st Dec 2021 2:22pm
21st Dec 2021 7:14pm
21st Dec 2021 7:40pm
Hi, Ashley_M
Thanks for highlighting flow and structure as key elements in this poem. You obviously have an eye for the process/development as well as the presentation of art. Interestingly, the only other dimension I would mention is the message itself, for you have summed up the work effectively.
Sincerely
cab
Thanks for highlighting flow and structure as key elements in this poem. You obviously have an eye for the process/development as well as the presentation of art. Interestingly, the only other dimension I would mention is the message itself, for you have summed up the work effectively.
Sincerely
cab
