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Similitude


You ask.

Is this hell or heaven,
In this

Repetition,

Just

Here and there -
There and here,

Barely living,

Just

Surviving
&
Fighting

Demons
&
Drifting

Into the drifts

Drifting
&
Dreaming

Death
&
Living

As clefts

Overhanging
&
Interchanging

Ever changing
&
Same staying

Staying the same:

Every

Day

Is

The

Same.

Written by Cipher_O (WarlordoftheWrittenWord)
Published
Author's Note
I have a tendency to sort of... think about a vast array of things, perhaps.

I am fascinated by that nature of existence.

For example...  Hell and Heaven.

These things.

And it's like...  When you stare longly into the abyss, the abyss stares back into you.

When you look, you will see things, things that are alive.

When I encountered the gnostic perspective, regarding the alien god and how we exist in a sort of artificial hell...  

THAT really took me places man...

I had an idea for this write like...  I dont know...  a few days ago?

but I saw it going a different direction?

I was talking to someone and it went this direction...

Which is totally cool.
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