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THE REALITY SPHERE
THE REALITY SPHERE
Everyone has their own perception of reality
None of their views have anything to do
with what is truly going on within the construction
of the whirlwind whirl of the world wrapping
around itself as Sin sang dancing within a constant
embrace within a never ending unbending
twirl of perfection and disgrace
"The sin of angels sang!!!!!!!"
as light and darkness swam through the Yin Yang
No fear here as we keep
spinning the reality sphere
(REALITY SPHERE)
(REALITIE'S FEAR)
(REALITEI'S HERE)
(REALITY SPHERE)
Everyone has their own perception of reality
None of their views have anything to do
with what is truly going on within the construction
of the whirlwind whirl of the world wrapping
around itself as Sin sang dancing within a constant
embrace within a never ending unbending
twirl of perfection and disgrace
"The sin of angels sang!!!!!!!"
as light and darkness swam through the Yin Yang
No fear here as we keep
spinning the reality sphere
(REALITY SPHERE)
(REALITIE'S FEAR)
(REALITEI'S HERE)
(REALITY SPHERE)
Published 17th Dec 2021
Author's Note
Well, you know, I was born one day, and since then, I was forced to witness every fucking day.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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17th Dec 2021 10:57am
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17th Dec 2021 11:46am
Anonymous
17th Dec 2021 11:52am
Potent and deeply penetrative, Archie.
Enjoyed!
🌹 - B
Enjoyed!
🌹 - B
17th Dec 2021 12:03pm
Dear A,
Your poem was great to me in content and form. Your authors note stole the show. Terrific piece.
H🌷
Your poem was great to me in content and form. Your authors note stole the show. Terrific piece.
H🌷
19th Dec 2021 10:19am
The Reality Anchovie
The imagery has an interesting, & welcome, turn to the moral, indicating that within the spinning within spinnings, rotations within rotations, there's a dance of sin--perfection & disgrace.
That's the element that deepens this, makes the murky, blurry ball of rotations something into which we want to peer more deeply, observe its mechanics & understand its meta-mechanics more on a more nuanced way.
That I don't quite get the pleasure of doing that, a regret. Much to enjoy here!
Liked!
The imagery has an interesting, & welcome, turn to the moral, indicating that within the spinning within spinnings, rotations within rotations, there's a dance of sin--perfection & disgrace.
That's the element that deepens this, makes the murky, blurry ball of rotations something into which we want to peer more deeply, observe its mechanics & understand its meta-mechanics more on a more nuanced way.
That I don't quite get the pleasure of doing that, a regret. Much to enjoy here!
Liked!
Look, man, I was searching through spiral notebooks to organize some short stories, and this
ancient poem popped up. I decided to edit it, type it out and publish it. And I did.
ancient poem popped up. I decided to edit it, type it out and publish it. And I did.
23rd Dec 2021 11:34am
3rd May 2022 11:11am
That's truth, but I did put honest truth into my work when I wrote it.
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