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Beautiful Torment
I could just send you money
That's not your style
I'm like you
Beautiful torment
Earned
Sacrifice
That's not your style
I'm like you
Beautiful torment
Earned
Sacrifice
Author's Note
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Beautiful Torment
16th Dec 2021 4:56am
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16th Dec 2021 10:41am
Re. Beautiful Torment
16th Dec 2021 6:59am
Dear PS,
No, you’re quite wrong. Send the money. 😉
Say! How’d you do that? I can see the poem until I open it and then I can only see the lovely painting.
I really like the strength of the subject. Earn your own way and be who you are with pride and joy. Big Dig!
You’re a magician! Now- send the cabbage. H🌷
No, you’re quite wrong. Send the money. 😉
Say! How’d you do that? I can see the poem until I open it and then I can only see the lovely painting.
I really like the strength of the subject. Earn your own way and be who you are with pride and joy. Big Dig!
You’re a magician! Now- send the cabbage. H🌷
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Re: Re. Beautiful Torment
16th Dec 2021 10:45am
Dear H
This is a DUP censor or CIA or KGB .....
I'm not smart enough to do magic literary tricks
I just work, paint and write neo-dirty poems
My wife says I'm an excellent supplies hoarder and the liquor cabinet is always full
Good at trash removal too
That's about it
Xx
Thanks H
This is a DUP censor or CIA or KGB .....
I'm not smart enough to do magic literary tricks
I just work, paint and write neo-dirty poems
My wife says I'm an excellent supplies hoarder and the liquor cabinet is always full
Good at trash removal too
That's about it
Xx
Thanks H
Anonymous
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16th Dec 2021 8:16am
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Re: Re. Beautiful Torment
16th Dec 2021 10:47am
Seeing is believing
Purple should be taught at colleges and universities
Maybe I could be an adjunct Professor ?
Thx K
Purple should be taught at colleges and universities
Maybe I could be an adjunct Professor ?
Thx K
Anonymous
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16th Dec 2021 12:44pm
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Re: Re. Beautiful Torment
16th Dec 2021 3:07pm
Did a reinvent
I'd teach my students the merits of depravity
No tenure for me
Ever !!!
I'd teach my students the merits of depravity
No tenure for me
Ever !!!
Anonymous
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16th Dec 2021 5:29pm
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Re. Beautiful Torment
16th Dec 2021 12:49pm
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16th Dec 2021 3:09pm
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16th Dec 2021 5:58pm
Re. Beautiful Torment
16th Dec 2021 2:53pm
Well. This is just perfection - words, image, blurry purpleness and the ever-present black - wow. We do love to play with our food before we eat it...
💜k
💜k
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16th Dec 2021 3:10pm
Re. Beautiful Torment
16th Dec 2021 11:21pm
Hey PS
Love the downward spiral of pillowy purple lines.
Kinda like my bank account during the holidays. LOL
Can't say enough about your art. Always a fan.
Muy bueno amigo!!
Love the downward spiral of pillowy purple lines.
Kinda like my bank account during the holidays. LOL
Can't say enough about your art. Always a fan.
Muy bueno amigo!!
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Re: Re. Beautiful Torment
17th Dec 2021 1:41am
Hey hot sauce 😋
Love working with purple, hot and cool and everything in-between
You wanna be my agent?
Making Art is easy, getting seen is something else
Amigo digs your comments
Thx ❤
Love working with purple, hot and cool and everything in-between
You wanna be my agent?
Making Art is easy, getting seen is something else
Amigo digs your comments
Thx ❤
Re. Beautiful Torment
18th Dec 2021 3:26pm
Ah, purple and just enough of the other colors for contrast; what's not to love. You have to give the money in person and make sure there are no police around. lol (yeah yeah, joking). When the beautiful torment mixes together you get something like that image.
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Re: Re. Beautiful Torment
18th Dec 2021 3:32pm
Purple has a way of visceral desire
I like to deliver in person
You trust me I'm sure but count it anyway
Torment is consumption waiting to happen
Payment on time
No receipt needed
Just your smile
Thx Kx
I like to deliver in person
You trust me I'm sure but count it anyway
Torment is consumption waiting to happen
Payment on time
No receipt needed
Just your smile
Thx Kx
Re. Beautiful Torment
19th Dec 2021 3:40am
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19th Dec 2021 10:56am
Re. Beautiful Torment
29th Dec 2021 9:27am
Some of us find beauty in the unlikeliest of places, and it's inspiring.
BIG LIKE.
BIG LIKE.
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Re: Re. Beautiful Torment
29th Dec 2021 12:04pm
There were multiple back stories that formed this poem
I'm lucky to be able to weave them together and present as them as universal ...
Thx Wally
I'm lucky to be able to weave them together and present as them as universal ...
Thx Wally
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29th Dec 2021 4:48pm
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29th Dec 2021 7:23pm