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Out for a Rip
Here in the 6ix
three-hundred clicks away
find a timmies-
double-double and a bit-
just a toonie today
then a mickey and pop
and to the Leafs game we go
where T Dot -good peeps -
seem like beauty Canucks
though
bit of a kerfuffle
when the Sabres score
and a fan beaks:
Whatchya oot and aboot for… eh?
Give’er.
three-hundred clicks away
find a timmies-
double-double and a bit-
just a toonie today
then a mickey and pop
and to the Leafs game we go
where T Dot -good peeps -
seem like beauty Canucks
though
bit of a kerfuffle
when the Sabres score
and a fan beaks:
Whatchya oot and aboot for… eh?
Give’er.
Published 14th Dec 2021
Author's Note
some good ole Canadian culture
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14th Dec 2021 8:34pm
Awww... as a die hard Tampa Bay Lightning fan, I gotta love the hockey references, Ursa! Some of the Canadian slang goes over my head but I definitely can hear that accent and bask within it... lol....really enjoyable!
Go BOLTS⚡!! (hahaha... I had to represent!)
Terrifically creative and totally smile inducing.
🌹 - 🍁
xo
B
Go BOLTS⚡!! (hahaha... I had to represent!)
Terrifically creative and totally smile inducing.
🌹 - 🍁
xo
B
15th Dec 2021 2:28pm
Thank you Bluevelvete, so happy the fun of the piece translated even if the specific language did not; I really appreciate your comment.
I hope that you are keeping well.
warmly,
ursa 💜
I hope that you are keeping well.
warmly,
ursa 💜
14th Dec 2021 9:27pm
Though I'm English I'm Rangers right through but I will always be a fan of THE GREAT ONE 99 forever Gretzky
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
15th Dec 2021 2:30pm
thank you for your comment, Ron. The Great One is definitely one of our most celebrated national treasures.
I hope that you have a great day,
ursa 💜
I hope that you have a great day,
ursa 💜
16th Dec 2021 6:41am
Dear U,
What a rush. Total score of a write. Playful and fun. I enjoy cricket. Hehe I know you’re talking about basketball. Wait. What? Soccer? Oh cripe. It’s baseball. I know that!…
Seriously, hat trick of a write. 😉
H🌷
What a rush. Total score of a write. Playful and fun. I enjoy cricket. Hehe I know you’re talking about basketball. Wait. What? Soccer? Oh cripe. It’s baseball. I know that!…
Seriously, hat trick of a write. 😉
H🌷
21st Dec 2021 8:00pm
Dear H,
Thank you so much. Love your clever comment here; made me smile as you always do!
Hope you're having an easy, effortless week.
warmly,
ursa 💜
Thank you so much. Love your clever comment here; made me smile as you always do!
Hope you're having an easy, effortless week.
warmly,
ursa 💜
21st Dec 2021 2:07am
Canadian culture indeed!
I was reminded of a joke from Mike Meyers' movie, the love guru:
What's a Quebec pizza?
Ketchup on a pop-tart.
Enjoyed!
Greatest sports movie of all-time, "Slap Shot," about hockey, has a wonderful Quebecois goalie.
I was reminded of a joke from Mike Meyers' movie, the love guru:
What's a Quebec pizza?
Ketchup on a pop-tart.
Enjoyed!
Greatest sports movie of all-time, "Slap Shot," about hockey, has a wonderful Quebecois goalie.
21st Dec 2021 8:01pm
thanks for stopping my, Mark. Sincerely appreciate your comment and joke... though is it really a joke ;)
have a great week!
ursa 💜
have a great week!
ursa 💜
