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Pine(ing)
Earthy, clean
spiced of fresh bark
minty air
and tender wafts of sandalwood
Swaying branches
dusted white,
how i love the enchanting dance
of aromatic spiked cones
glistening in random swells
Deep scented musky fir
woodsy and alluring
to feel, that sticky sap
so full of ambered ambrosia
senses fire off potent memories
bouquets of nostalgia
that convene in every needle
Highlighting clearly
specific plumes of possibity
and swirling magic
where hope and inspiration
collide in juniper
with just a tinge of eucalyptus
Gloriously lost
drowning in rustic smells of reminisce
O' hearty-delicate beauty
were winter's lush greenery
engulfs and enfolds
Blanketing my entire being
from thought
to each gentle action
savory hints of wonder,
reflection and verdant dreams
sweetly perfume
A lifelong cherished, love
kissed with care, are my scented wishes
that call forth divine fantasy
sense memory at it's finest
a whimsically hope
abundantly filled
of nothing but
pure pine essence
is a fragrant dream come true.
Author's Note
Dreams and musings about the love of all things that smell of REAL pine. It's an epic kind of love, bordering on addiction... lol...
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İBlu2021
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İBlu2021
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Re. Pine(ing)
14th Dec 2021 5:07am
there's nothing so evocative for memory than fragrance...can almost smell the pine in this...love it B
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Re: Re. Pine(ing)
14th Dec 2021 5:21am
Awww... it's truly one of my absolute favorite scents.
Thanks for the lovely sentiments, Lawrence.
Glad you enjoyed it.
🌹 - 🌲
x
B
Thanks for the lovely sentiments, Lawrence.
Glad you enjoyed it.
🌹 - 🌲
x
B
Re. Pine(ing)
14th Dec 2021 5:48am
Christmas is our hearts. I'm pine(ing) for you, LOL. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. Pine(ing)
14th Dec 2021 7:15am
lol... nice word play, Francisco! .... Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts... I appreciate your faithful readership!!...Happy Holidays.
🌹 - 🌲
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Re: Re. Pine(ing)
14th Dec 2021 7:00pm
Re. Pine(ing)
14th Dec 2021 5:54am
Ahhh, ladylove, this is a breath of winter magicks! im givin it pagan purrrz♡ Makes me miss those heady east coast scents of evergreen, especially late at night once the wind captures and disburses them to await the morning air.
You do inspire (aaaand im also a bit of an addict, lol)
You always have such a talent for evoking a season's primal essence.. simply beautiful, in words and deeper meanings all wrapped up in a glorious spill.
"sense memory at it's finest"
~epic words.. ima call it ur BANG phrase! ;)
lotsa loves, purdypurdy.. i have missed reading you..
~d
You do inspire (aaaand im also a bit of an addict, lol)
You always have such a talent for evoking a season's primal essence.. simply beautiful, in words and deeper meanings all wrapped up in a glorious spill.
"sense memory at it's finest"
~epic words.. ima call it ur BANG phrase! ;)
lotsa loves, purdypurdy.. i have missed reading you..
~d
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Re: Re. Pine(ing)
14th Dec 2021 7:28am
Ohhh my how I've missed you, your poetry and your tremendously beautiful presence upon my page.... It's the delicious sounds of darksighs that spruces (had to use the pine reference!!... lol ) it up, perfectly... 👌🏻
Your thoughts of heady evergreen scents and pagan purrrz are felt in return, dearest beauty... my heart is full and my sniffer is happy with all the lovely aromas that surround...
Your enormous kindness soothes me like a tonic.... A special, sweet, elixir of dark communion, that flower-blooms a sense of confidence and motivation.... Instilling your gorgeously unique intent.
I hope you are hanging in there and doing well...
All my faithful and true..... everything,sent your way ✨ 💫✨
🌹 - 💙
x
Your thoughts of heady evergreen scents and pagan purrrz are felt in return, dearest beauty... my heart is full and my sniffer is happy with all the lovely aromas that surround...
Your enormous kindness soothes me like a tonic.... A special, sweet, elixir of dark communion, that flower-blooms a sense of confidence and motivation.... Instilling your gorgeously unique intent.
I hope you are hanging in there and doing well...
All my faithful and true..... everything,sent your way ✨ 💫✨
🌹 - 💙
x
Re. Pine(ing)
14th Dec 2021 7:28am
Re. Pine(ing)
14th Dec 2021 8:18am
Awesome absolutely loved this piece young lady
You are so skilled with words I adore your work and your good self
Love and light
FOREVER TEAM BLUE
Ron x
You are so skilled with words I adore your work and your good self
Love and light
FOREVER TEAM BLUE
Ron x
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Re: Re. Pine(ing)
14th Dec 2021 1:00pm
Hey there, dear man!
Your supportive encouragement is better than a cup of coffee, this morning.... All my deepest thanks, love and respect-🙏
So glad you found some enjoyment here.
🌹 - 💙 - ⚔️
xoxo
B
Your supportive encouragement is better than a cup of coffee, this morning.... All my deepest thanks, love and respect-🙏
So glad you found some enjoyment here.
🌹 - 💙 - ⚔️
xoxo
B
Re. Pine(ing)
14th Dec 2021 11:59am
dear BV
as i was enjoying the scented flow here
i suddenly remembered a news report from yesterday
about a business that makes scented candles
that was destroyed by the Tornado in Kentucky
and that the dogs trained to use scent to find human survivors in such disasters
were being hampered in their search by the over whelming remaining scent of candles
let us share in the hope that there will be survivors
who will be able to be soothed by the healing beauty of poetry
a warm smile
silent lotus
as i was enjoying the scented flow here
i suddenly remembered a news report from yesterday
about a business that makes scented candles
that was destroyed by the Tornado in Kentucky
and that the dogs trained to use scent to find human survivors in such disasters
were being hampered in their search by the over whelming remaining scent of candles
let us share in the hope that there will be survivors
who will be able to be soothed by the healing beauty of poetry
a warm smile
silent lotus
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Re: Re. Pine(ing)
14th Dec 2021 12:58pm
Ohh wow, SL... The irony of life can sometimes feel like a cruel trick, hence the dogs and candles, so that's definitely a good idea to rally all our good thoughts of hopefulness to send out well wishes of safe found souls.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for taking the time to read.
It's very much appreciated and I extend my sincere thanks.
🌹 - 💙
B
Much love your way
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for taking the time to read.
It's very much appreciated and I extend my sincere thanks.
🌹 - 💙
B
Much love your way
Re. Pine(ing)
14th Dec 2021 3:00pm
Aaah, lost in the wonderful woodland path you've led me on.
I know this feeling, of just being there, taking in nature, the sounds, the sights, the smells, all so delicious.
I can feel you there, submerged in your senses. All of them alight with delight.
I truly know what it is like just to feel what is around you..
Your poem is beautiful, thank you for sharing it B
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I know this feeling, of just being there, taking in nature, the sounds, the sights, the smells, all so delicious.
I can feel you there, submerged in your senses. All of them alight with delight.
I truly know what it is like just to feel what is around you..
Your poem is beautiful, thank you for sharing it B
💜💜💜💜🌲🌲🌲🌲☘️
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Re: Re. Pine(ing)
14th Dec 2021 9:07pm
Awwww... Your comments really mean a lot to me, W. I figured you'd more than understand, with each walk that Buster takes, your appreciation for our natural surroundings must increase.... allowing those feelings to permeate!
I'm so glad you enjoyed and found some beauty within. All my humble thanks and warmest gratitude - ✨
So very much obliged - 💙
🌹 - B
xo
I'm so glad you enjoyed and found some beauty within. All my humble thanks and warmest gratitude - ✨
So very much obliged - 💙
🌹 - B
xo
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Re: Re. Pine(ing)
14th Dec 2021 9:11pm
I am so happy you felt this little ode to my sniffer... lol... It's really nice that you felt I could pull a reader in... that's the ultimate goal, I feel! ...
All my gratitude... It was a hard one to write, in the end.... as I'm still trying to get past the ache of loss... so your comments and time given, are very much appreciated 🙏
🌹 - 💙
B
All my gratitude... It was a hard one to write, in the end.... as I'm still trying to get past the ache of loss... so your comments and time given, are very much appreciated 🙏
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Pine(ing)
15th Dec 2021 1:38am
the sweet sent of pine that fills the house for the Blue Spuce all deck out for the chirstas tree is so sweet
well done
well done
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Re: Re. Pine(ing)
I agree, DC! It's a sweet and beautifully enticing smell.
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts.
It's very much appreciated - 🙏
🌹 - B
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts.
It's very much appreciated - 🙏
🌹 - B
Re. Pine(ing)
15th Dec 2021 6:00pm
Re: Re. Pine(ing)
15th Dec 2021 6:11pm
I think that the sense of smell is the most powerful when it comes to recalling memories... so I absolutely agree with you, CS.
Thanks for taking the time to leave your thoughts, I love knowing you've visited and possibly enjoyed.
Much love and loads of delicious fragrant wishes sent your way ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Thanks for taking the time to leave your thoughts, I love knowing you've visited and possibly enjoyed.
Much love and loads of delicious fragrant wishes sent your way ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Pine(ing)
15th Dec 2021 9:28pm
Re: Re. Pine(ing)
15th Dec 2021 9:54pm
Loved this comment, thank you. :)
I appreciate you taking the time and I'm extremely grateful for the list add.
Warm regards,
🌹 - B
I appreciate you taking the time and I'm extremely grateful for the list add.
Warm regards,
🌹 - B
Re. Pine(ing)
Ah, the smell of sanding and smelling the fresh pine, the needles brushed aside, the oozing sap leaving its essence on the fingers; then encapsulating its beauty with a clear coat of sticky, spreadable lacquer. 😉🖌
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Re: Re. Pine(ing)
Omg... LEO!!!!
I was beginning to think 088 had met his doom!!
My joy is transformative,seeing you on my page🦋.
I can't believe you're here!! I hope you had a lovely Thanksgiving and are doing well.... You've definitely been missed, more than you know!
And Ohhh my.... How the innuendo of your sticky, shiny comments just reflect the viscosity to perfection 👌🏻.... heh heh 😈... I bask within...
(please don't be a stranger, I don't like being without you for that long.... at all!)
Thanks for the killer sentiments. You're awesome, dear Leo.
🌹 - 💋
xoxo
I was beginning to think 088 had met his doom!!
My joy is transformative,seeing you on my page🦋.
I can't believe you're here!! I hope you had a lovely Thanksgiving and are doing well.... You've definitely been missed, more than you know!
And Ohhh my.... How the innuendo of your sticky, shiny comments just reflect the viscosity to perfection 👌🏻.... heh heh 😈... I bask within...
(please don't be a stranger, I don't like being without you for that long.... at all!)
Thanks for the killer sentiments. You're awesome, dear Leo.
🌹 - 💋
xoxo
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17th Dec 2021 1:46pm
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17th Dec 2021 1:53pm
Re. Pine(ing)
Anonymous
16th Dec 2021 4:20pm
calm and sweet
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Re: Re. Pine(ing)
16th Dec 2021 4:26pm
Hey there, Noelle :)
I am delighted you think so! Thanks so much for stopping by to read and for leaving me your thoughts... It's much appreciated.
Welcome to DUP
I hope you enjoy your time here!
🌹 - B
I am delighted you think so! Thanks so much for stopping by to read and for leaving me your thoughts... It's much appreciated.
Welcome to DUP
I hope you enjoy your time here!
🌹 - B
Re. Pine(ing)
17th Dec 2021 4:10am
Pine brings a flood of memories.
"swaying branches dusted white"
beautiful imagery.
❣️🙏🏼
"swaying branches dusted white"
beautiful imagery.
❣️🙏🏼
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Re: Re. Pine(ing)
17th Dec 2021 4:40am
I absolutely agree, KP... oube/That crazy pine scent, It really affects my memories in such an impactful way.
I'm so glad you enjoyed and found resonance, too.
Love seeing you and I hope you're having a lovely holiday season, to date.... and of course, in the days ahead... ❄️🎁🛷🕯️
🌹 - 💙
B
I'm so glad you enjoyed and found resonance, too.
Love seeing you and I hope you're having a lovely holiday season, to date.... and of course, in the days ahead... ❄️🎁🛷🕯️
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Pine(ing)
23rd Dec 2021 2:24pm
Thank you for this beautiful piece as the powerful fragrance of the sap of the pine and the pine cones dance in the air on this glorious day. Thank you for the wonderful start to my day
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Re: Re. Pine(ing)
23rd Dec 2021 2:40pm
Hey there, NB
That's a truly lovely comment and I'm glad you enjoyed reading and found something pleasurable within my pine scented tribute! It's definitely a favorite! 🎍🍃🌲
Very much obliged,
🌹 - B
That's a truly lovely comment and I'm glad you enjoyed reading and found something pleasurable within my pine scented tribute! It's definitely a favorite! 🎍🍃🌲
Very much obliged,
🌹 - B
Re. Pine(ing)
29th Dec 2021 2:18am
You took us there, made our senses reel in the scenery so poetically, so fantastically, it's amazing. Love the title and wordplay.
Wonderful work.
Wonderful work.
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Re: Re. Pine(ing)
Awww... thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me, Walter. This one was near and dear to me, so I really appreciate your kind words and RL add!
Thanks for smelling that effervescence!! 🌲
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B
Thanks for smelling that effervescence!! 🌲
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B