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We can't hear
We can’t hear
insanities darken place where voice scream an walls bleed
Hells hounds rules this place within this darkness is a madding race
That no one wins it’s in their mind instead
Voices echo in their head screams of punishment an seeing nothing but blackness ahead
Wind storms of chills an no nervous left depending on their self to struggle through the swap
Inside their head with fist drawn an falling tears wild crazy dreams that only make them scream
With out light they can’t see what crawls at night as
the spiders cocoons their minds with hallucinations of nothing hells fears
closed straightjackets fit the best because we don’t care we can’t hear
insanities darken place where voice scream an walls bleed
Hells hounds rules this place within this darkness is a madding race
That no one wins it’s in their mind instead
Voices echo in their head screams of punishment an seeing nothing but blackness ahead
Wind storms of chills an no nervous left depending on their self to struggle through the swap
Inside their head with fist drawn an falling tears wild crazy dreams that only make them scream
With out light they can’t see what crawls at night as
the spiders cocoons their minds with hallucinations of nothing hells fears
closed straightjackets fit the best because we don’t care we can’t hear
Published 6th Mar 2012
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6th Mar 2012 7:02am
13th Mar 2012 12:32pm
*places
*voices
-omit "is" replace with a comma
*and, not an
*without, one word
i liked this :) the concept, the perspective. "we cant hear" as opposed to "we dont hear". too many times we perceive that people 'dont hear' when actually they 'cant' usually because they're so self absorbed and have tunnel-vision.
*voices
-omit "is" replace with a comma
*and, not an
*without, one word
i liked this :) the concept, the perspective. "we cant hear" as opposed to "we dont hear". too many times we perceive that people 'dont hear' when actually they 'cant' usually because they're so self absorbed and have tunnel-vision.
