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sorrow is mine
peak and then descend
sorrow is mine
in my chambers kept
lest I forget the woman I am
in the sacred arts knowledgeable
fine tuning my instrument
my soul a place of refinement
sadness flavors it so well
melancholy epiphanies write me love letters
humility teaches me wisdom
reflected in the gaze of others
my heart and morals
if I fail a soul, I keen inside until I make it right
my being heavy
I wear a crown of hurt
I let my sisters and brothers down too often
forgetting they are reflections,
of the face of my maker
Published 11th Dec 2021
Author's Note
I am not a religious person I ascribe to no organized religion I do however believe there is one who created us I hear him in my mind... sometimes I can really dislike a person or their treatment of me... he then reminds me that is one of his own children who bear the likeness of his own personality perhaps even reflecting his own feelings towards me...
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11th Dec 2021 5:27pm
good morning dearest poet thank you honor me with your comment though it is simply what was on my heart to write... have a beautiful day today thank you❤
11th Dec 2021 6:06pm
A interesting piece of truth with though provoking process of subconsciousness with the heart and spiritual soul 🙏👊
11th Dec 2021 6:09pm
thank you dearest Stoney I was just looking at someone one day and told our creator I don't like him... he then told me that person was a refection in part of himself our creator...parts of him reflected in the faces of our brothers and sisters...
11th Dec 2021 6:16pm
So true indeed for who are we to judge another human being for we all have imperfections that sometimes we don't see in ourselves
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12th Dec 2021 00:54am
11th Dec 2021 8:31pm
That last ending stanza was a boom!!
Loved it. I get where you are coming from with this write.
Also enjoyed your authors note.
It is hard for me to forgive when I feel I've been wronged.
I go to war for people I genuinely care about. So when it
is not reciprocated I get hurt - then swiftly move on.
Sadness is part of the human condition.
This poem fed me in a way. Validation that I am not alone in my feelings.
Awesome:)
Loved it. I get where you are coming from with this write.
Also enjoyed your authors note.
It is hard for me to forgive when I feel I've been wronged.
I go to war for people I genuinely care about. So when it
is not reciprocated I get hurt - then swiftly move on.
Sadness is part of the human condition.
This poem fed me in a way. Validation that I am not alone in my feelings.
Awesome:)
12th Dec 2021 00:57am
thank you most graciously beautiful Adelphina it was revealed to me when I told our creator I didn't like someone that they are at times reflections of parts of his own personality which gave me pause to consider and take another look at some of the people I dislike... I deeply appreciate your insightful comment❤
12th Dec 2021 11:45am
When I read your work I often have the feeling that you are both:
Within and beyond the work.
Which makes for such an interesting experience.
There is much that is thought provoking in this piece, Crimsin.
Within and beyond the work.
Which makes for such an interesting experience.
There is much that is thought provoking in this piece, Crimsin.
12th Dec 2021 2:32pm
hello dearest Cipher this an odd thought I have sometimes... sometimes I think it is possible to manifest yourself in more that one person say perhaps globally or even in the vast universes of course the root of you would be in one place perhaps a hidden place... just my strange thinking... thank you for your most interesting thoughts❤
13th Dec 2021 10:44am
:)))
Oh... there is this movie...
I think its geared to teens, maybe?
But I find inspiration in a vast array of places.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Every_Day_(2018_film)
Perhaps you would enjoy.
Oh... there is this movie...
I think its geared to teens, maybe?
But I find inspiration in a vast array of places.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Every_Day_(2018_film)
Perhaps you would enjoy.
13th Dec 2021 2:09pm
thank you dearest Cipher for the movie reference I found it most interesting... I really think this how we travel space not through technology...
27th Dec 2021 7:14pm
"humility teaches me wisdom" that's a powerful line. It really permeates our entire being so as to comprehend others. This world is ass backwards as of late, but finding those who speak truthful wise words does require humility.
Outstanding spill.
Outstanding spill.
