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You play me boldly
Cello body contour
Glows white again on the bed.
You play me boldly
And the symphony is not enough for us!
After all, my every movement,
And every cry, and my every moan
Sounds like a chord of delight
The string is stretched and thin.
Sensual and familiar,
So amazing, as if we were somewhere
in the clouds, not at home,
Received the morning as a gift.
Cello back and hips
Elastically arched towards.
With a bow you barely touch,
And immediately my petals tremble
The melody of love and passion
I am your instrument always
Play me, put together a concert,
Beds chamber stage
Glows white again on the bed.
You play me boldly
And the symphony is not enough for us!
After all, my every movement,
And every cry, and my every moan
Sounds like a chord of delight
The string is stretched and thin.
Sensual and familiar,
So amazing, as if we were somewhere
in the clouds, not at home,
Received the morning as a gift.
Cello back and hips
Elastically arched towards.
With a bow you barely touch,
And immediately my petals tremble
The melody of love and passion
I am your instrument always
Play me, put together a concert,
Beds chamber stage
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Re. You play me boldly
10th Dec 2021 9:40pm
An instrument that's needed to be played over and over...you bring a serene sensuality to the air about with wafts of pleasure permeating from within...humming in the wind xoxo
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10th Dec 2021 10:20pm
Oh yes! I need a strong set of hands to play me over and over again Tim. ;) Someone to strike all of the chords and hit the really high notes of ecstasy. Those tones vibrating throughout the whole body from the inside and outside. xoxo 🎻🎶🎶
Re. You play me boldly
10th Dec 2021 9:54pm
Great piece, great read. Sensual and seductive a very clever write
Loved it
Love and light
Ron xx
Loved it
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. You play me boldly
10th Dec 2021 10:19pm
Your words are always music to my ears Ron. I am really happy you loved it and thought it was a clever write. Thank you for all the love and light! xoxo 🎻🎶🎶
Re. You play me boldly
10th Dec 2021 10:08pm
That picture
These words
I am lost in her sensual forest
Is there anyone more mysterious and haunting than KatrinaX ?
Oh to play her
Chamber music or Chamber 13
We all know the answer
Lush and relevant
Petals trembling in orgasmic sensation
Stunning and thrilling vibe
I'm drawn in and don't want to leave
BIG EXQUISITE LIKE
These words
I am lost in her sensual forest
Is there anyone more mysterious and haunting than KatrinaX ?
Oh to play her
Chamber music or Chamber 13
We all know the answer
Lush and relevant
Petals trembling in orgasmic sensation
Stunning and thrilling vibe
I'm drawn in and don't want to leave
BIG EXQUISITE LIKE
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Re: Re. You play me boldly
10th Dec 2021 11:04pm
Ah, mysterious and haunting - that definitely sounds like me. Getting lost in my sensual forest can be truly exciting, and definitely somewhat scary too. Extreme stuff happens in there. lol Oh, how I would love to be played in the Chamber; I know that would be a beautiful combination of cries, screams, moans, and sighs to light up the stage. Thanks for playing with me PS. xoxo 🎻🎶🎶
Re. You play me boldly
10th Dec 2021 11:31pm
Definitely leaves the body and soul craving for a sensual moment it ain't nothing wrong with a cat and mice game 😉👊👊👊
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Re: Re. You play me boldly
11th Dec 2021 6:59pm
Ah yes! Always craving a sensual moment. body and soul, and I love a good cat and mouse game... Have to keep things exciting and interesting. ;) xoxo 🎻🎶🎶
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11th Dec 2021 7:52pm
Re. You play me boldly
11th Dec 2021 00:57am
Re: Re. You play me boldly
11th Dec 2021 7:00pm
Definitely, and of course a lot of the fun is in reciprocating; giving him so much orgasmic bliss too. ;) xoxo 🎻🎶🎶
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Re: Re. You play me boldly
11th Dec 2021 7:15pm
Oh, yes! I would definitely love being your instrument feeling every movement of your hands and fingers as you played me. ;) We would need to practice every chord, note, and sound over and over again. I know the final result would be spectacular with an extraordinary climax. And although not a guitarist, I am also very good with my hands and fingers so rest assured you would be played to perfection also... xoxo 🎻🎶🎶
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Re. You play me boldly
KX you have seductively ''orchestrated' this sensual write with so much of your patented passion.
Your poetry is svelte, supple, and graceful,
just like the cello,
that you so eloquently & metaphorically use in your alluring poem .
I can feel your vibrato from your sexy ensemble of instrumental nuance.
You had me at, ''Cello'', lol
You are unquestionably in ''tune'' with conveying your desires through poetry.
I absolutely love this passionate submission.
Sensational Write!!!!
Your poetry is svelte, supple, and graceful,
just like the cello,
that you so eloquently & metaphorically use in your alluring poem .
I can feel your vibrato from your sexy ensemble of instrumental nuance.
You had me at, ''Cello'', lol
You are unquestionably in ''tune'' with conveying your desires through poetry.
I absolutely love this passionate submission.
Sensational Write!!!!
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Re: Re. You play me boldly
11th Dec 2021 9:41pm
I love playing music for you Feet, you get the full orchestra and I am the only instrument you need. I really love that you are so in tune with my patented passion. That patent never expires. ;) And I have no doubt you know how to play an instrument; I am sure you can produce a beautiful vibrato. If the king of metaphors likes my use of them then I consider that an accomplishment. "You had me at, "Cello"" lol, so cheesy... just so cheesy... (but I like cheesy). I am so happy you loved it. xoxo 🎻🎶🎶
Re. You play me boldly
11th Dec 2021 7:44am
Re: Re. You play me boldly
11th Dec 2021 9:50pm
lol, I am really not sure what to say to that PQ. It sounds so obscene. ;) I am thinking of all the ways I might Pluck, or be Plucked by, someone. lol xoxo 🎻🎶🎶
Re: Re. You play me boldly
11th Dec 2021 10:10pm
Well let’s just say it wouldn’t be polite to talk with a mouthful lol 😉 The rhythm of your poem is exquisite and every syllable rings out with desire. By the by, as an amateur guitarist I’m pretty good at fingering lol. 🤣👉👌
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Re. You play me boldly
11th Dec 2021 7:51am
I always love the likening of a woman's body to a musical instrument. Appreciated is the man who knows how to play it.
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Re: Re. You play me boldly
11th Dec 2021 9:53pm
Oh definitely, the most beautiful instrument a man can learn to play and his talents are infinitely appreciated. ;) I am sure the Solomon Song is an amazing one that requires the right instrument to hit all of the notes. xoxo 🎻🎶🎶
Re. You play me boldly
11th Dec 2021 4:17pm
Would you visit me in prison ?
My sexual prison that is?
I'm trained in the art of satisfying urges
Think we might be wired the same way
Trembling as I await your response
Like your writing
My sexual prison that is?
I'm trained in the art of satisfying urges
Think we might be wired the same way
Trembling as I await your response
Like your writing
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Re: Re. You play me boldly
11th Dec 2021 10:01pm
Oooo, sexual prison gets me excited. That training needs to be put to the test Warden... I am a natural at satisfying urges; and I have so many that need to be satisfied myself. ;) Wired for sex, yes! I am so happy you like my writing. xoxo 🎻🎶🎶
Re. You play me boldly
11th Dec 2021 8:34pm
Another fearless write amiga.
I do love the cello comparison to being
female and her love of being played.
Well done:)
I do love the cello comparison to being
female and her love of being played.
Well done:)
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Re: Re. You play me boldly
11th Dec 2021 10:27pm
Hey Adelphina! You always make me smile and I love seeing you. ;) I can be fearless sometimes but I always hesitate to post anything. lol I am glad you like the metaphor, the right musician can really play us so well. xoxo 🎻🎶🎶
Re. You play me boldly
13th Dec 2021 5:41am
Not only did this terrific right bring to mind a song, it also inspired at least one title for a poem of my own. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Re. You play me boldly
13th Dec 2021 3:11pm
Hey Jazz! Now you have me wondering what song it brought to mind. ;) I absolutely love being an inspiration so I am really looking forward to that poem. Thanks for giving me your thoughts with me. xoxo 🎻🎶🎶
Re. You play me boldly
Anonymous
13th Dec 2021 9:30am
This is the true definition of sexy appeal. X martusss
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Re. You play me boldly
15th Dec 2021 8:03pm
Wonderful piece that will resonate with any all bedsheets caught up in the erotic moment.
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Re: Re. You play me boldly
15th Dec 2021 10:42pm
Hey CasketSharpe, I am so happy you stopped by and enjoyed this piece. As long as it resonated with you then that is what counts for me. ;) The bedsheets do get caught up in the music of the moment. xoxo 🎻🎶🎶
Re. You play me boldly
The fingers strumming & plucking the "right" strings, leads to some sweet "sheet" music.
Ah, your poem has the conductor blushing. They are now enamored with the string section.
Ah, your poem has the conductor blushing. They are now enamored with the string section.
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Re: Re. You play me boldly
16th Dec 2021 3:18pm
Oh yes! strumming those strings definitely produces the most pleasurable melodies... I am sure you know how to write some sweet "sheet" music DaVinci. ;) I always have the conductor blushing, he does not know what to do with me. But the orchestra knows how to play an sexy instrument. ;) xoxo 🎻🎶🎶
Re. You play me boldly
17th Dec 2021 4:15pm
I used to play cello, but then I traded it for drums (but that was decades ago). Now cello seems more elegant for all it's form, class and well, art form.
Wonderful piece Kristina. Liked the play on words and seductive tones weaving through, like notes being played beautifully.
Well done!
Wonderful piece Kristina. Liked the play on words and seductive tones weaving through, like notes being played beautifully.
Well done!
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Re: Re. You play me boldly
17th Dec 2021 6:38pm
There is definitely something to be said for the beating of the drums and the vibrations they send through my body. That form, class, and art is why I thought the cello a good choice to represent the female body. It is quite elegant, and I think someone that knows how to play it has class and skillful hands. ;)
I loved weaving seductive tones and playing notes for you Wally reminding you of playing the cello. I know you are still skillfully and boldly playing so many things today. xoxo 🎻🎶🎶
I loved weaving seductive tones and playing notes for you Wally reminding you of playing the cello. I know you are still skillfully and boldly playing so many things today. xoxo 🎻🎶🎶
Re. You play me boldly
18th Dec 2021 5:31am
with poetry like that and beauty to match, there is not a man alive that wouldn't want to create a bold melody in the clouds celebrating your body until they felt your perfect pedals tremble and brought your moans out to finish the show <3 what a lucky conductor he'd be
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Re: Re. You play me boldly
18th Dec 2021 4:04pm
Such a wonderfully beautiful and seductive comment. I find myself at a loss for words to express my appreciation, deer in the headlights. I adore everything you said... I always want to be that beautiful instrument enabling a man to create the most intense melody, hitting every note and chord. The bass vibrating throughout our bodies; feeling the petals tremble with pleasure ready to burst under the conductor's skillful touch. 🎻🎶🎶
Re: Re. You play me boldly
18th Dec 2021 4:12pm
You are all that and more!
I'm glad you felt what I said.
There is nothing easier to tell than the truth. You are welcome gorgeous girl. Keep it up! 💕
I'm glad you felt what I said.
There is nothing easier to tell than the truth. You are welcome gorgeous girl. Keep it up! 💕
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Re. You play me boldly
31st Dec 2021 3:18am
The spring symphony of your words is like bathing in a hot spring where every ache begins a new concerto whose invitation to love is everything a man could want.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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Re: Re. You play me boldly
31st Dec 2021 5:38pm
And these words play me like a beautiful symphony. Each chord strikes a new ache of desires from which a hot spring arises seething and flooding the banks. The desire to be everything that a man could want, to be the most beautiful instrument. 🎻🎶🎶
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Re: Re. You play me boldly
7th Jan 2022 00:03am
Hey there HamBone... I remember that requirement. Still, if you have to do it then I am happy that you found one of mine you liked. :) I really appreciate being one of your first few comments... Feel free to stop by anytime. Welcome to DUP. I hope you had a great New Year. 🎻🎶🎶
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